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BellaDonnaButterfly
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abusethis was so sad but nicely written. i could never imagine the heartbreak of that situation but my best friend did. Sara and Grissom's heartbreak was believable and handled with respectfully. Thank you for the wonderful stories and the great times i have reading them. You have great talent.
Brandy
LielieS
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseSee! You can write other stuff than just humor. I still liked it, in a weird way, yeah.. ehr, well, poor GSR. Poor Sara, poor Griss. He became human! (lol, sorry bad joke..) So, you wanted them to have a boy? What's the name? xD
CapnCrunch4Dinner
2007-11-11
ch 1,
abusesad...but eloquent
eleen
2007-11-09
ch 1,
abuse“They put my tiny baby in a tiny box.” My Lord, that line just broke my heart. It's so sad and simple and perfect.

Amazing story! Normally I avoid Tragedies but I had to check out this one.
BrookeGreene
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseUm, I probably shouldn't say comment on this but... it's personal?

Aww, crap, your fic made me cry! Usually when I read your stuff and then cry, it's because I'm laughing so damn hard! That was more than a 'wee bit' depressing. That was... really depressing. But also really good... I don't know what else to say...
The Smoose
2007-11-07
ch 1,
abuseAw, now I'm all deprressed again. These swift mood swings can't be healthy.
theyHAUNTme
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseaww, this was so sad! Please get back to writing humor...your fics are always funny enough to make me cry! Well, this was a very good story and beautifully written.
9ud9ir190ne6ad
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseAw! That was so sad! But i loved it!
TDCSI
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseI love it.

I've watched my cousins bury thier youngeters very early. My aspect on life is that parents are not suppose to out live thier children, but that doesn't always happen, there is always something out there that will cause confusion. But that's life.
geek.but.you.love.me
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseyou have no idea how hard that is to read as a new parent.
It made me sob if im totally honest, No parent, absolutely No parent should ever have to experience that and it makes me feel extremly lucky when i hear Matty cry for me from down the hall.


Josie
;(
jenstog
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseNot going to lie- I let out a sob myself at the end. I could be wrong, but you don't have kids, right? Its just odd b/c most times people w/o their own children just can't understand maternal feelings- but you put enough emotion in this to make it feel as though you know just what it's like to have that child and the writing captured the fear of my dreams that was reality for this fic. Anyways I like your funnies always but this one is special and I'm glad you did it. I'm even gonna favorite this depressing little blip.
thjersyjnkx33
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuse:(
it makes me sad.
i'm gunna guess that the 'personal' part was about the kid you told me
about in the e-mail??
that sucks.
LapsusStili
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseThe grief, the anger, the frustration, and in the end a glimmer of hope and will to carry on - all very real emotions for such a tragedy. The loss of a loved one is always hard, but the loss of one's child... unspeakable. Well done.
Invisible Evidence
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseaww
*tear*
that was really, sad?
I'm soory, sad is a bad word and doesnt cover it but, yes. It was 'sad'
-Rosie
Hellomoto93
2007-11-06
ch 1,
abuseWow, that was terribly sad and not at all what you usually right. But it was still beautiful. Really beautiful in that horrible, heartwrenching way. If you know what I mean.
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