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Scraw.
2009-11-30 . chapter 2
SCRAW -- It's actually very good.
Haine xP
2009-11-10 . chapter 3
You Know, some people I know said that this was a horrible fan fiction, but I think it is quite good. o.o
Elvish-Princess99
2009-07-04 . chapter 1
Never, ever thought I'd say this, but...it's too well-written. I loved the brain-vacuum that was that tragedy for all the hysteria, the plotlessness and the shocking spelling. In short, I loved it for the 'lulz' it gave me. So I salute you for the attempt- that's bravery I can admire- but I think I'll stick with She Who Is the Bane of the English Language. Kudos, though.
Kiah
2009-06-07 . chapter 1
... Is it a problem if I worship you?

Because, in all seriousness now, only a complete genius could turn this into something THIS eloquent that I would actually want to read.

I couldn't even read all of the original for the lulz. My brain shut down. I mean - my God, you're absolutely awesome!

I'm so happy that there are legitimately talented people out there - for a moment, I thought there wasn't. :)
Twilight Temptress
2009-05-28 . chapter 1
Oh my...
I do believe I love you.
xD

I'm currently on Chapter 15 of that one...thing claimed to be a fanfiction by Tara or whatever. I'm not completely sure as to why I'm reading it. o.O

Anyway, this is fantastic! The original can't even compare to this. Ahh, you're writing skills are lovely. Great job. ;D

-TT
cassie-hime
2009-05-03 . chapter 4
Ahem*...
What do u think ur doing?
UPDATE!
I love it!
I always thought my immortals appeal was in the spelling mistakes etc
And I've enjoyed a OC story on this website.. But your story is surprisingly interesting
I've concluded its ur writing.. So don't be selfish:P share ur writing around! Give us a new chapter!
Princess of Nargles
2009-04-26 . chapter 4
You have accomplished the impossible. I never thought that in this life someone could take My Immortal and turn it into something that was well-written, had an actual plot, and was INTERESTING. Please, do continue on with this.

And I know that the original isn't on Fanfiction anymore, but it was reposted on a different website (delete the spaces): http:// myimmortalrehost. webs. com/ chapters122. htm

Really, please continue with this. I actually WANT to know what happens in this, whereas with Tara's version I couldn't get through the first ten chapters before leaving to read my entire science textbook to erase the awfulness.
Nalie
2009-04-18 . chapter 4
That...

That...

I'm confused. You just broke my mind. I don't understand how My Immortal could actually turn into something that... that I find /interesting/.

I really want to read more of this...

~Eden
liz
2009-04-13 . chapter 1
holy shi*t...wow...bravo
Di
2009-04-13 . chapter 4
This is amazimg :3 you simply must continue this otherwise it will just be left on a void of emptiness. Haha the only thing is you didn't make enoby (Ebony) A vampire eating count Chocola(Lol jk jk) I would enjoy reading more of this in the near future if you would continue the novel :3 Thanks,
Diana
Syrah
2009-04-08 . chapter 4
I think this is really good. A proverbial breath of fresh air after 40 chapters of...whatever. Please continue writing, because you're doing really well!
MantisSage
2009-03-23 . chapter 1
Just for taking on this project, I compliment you.
Although I did love the original- I've never read a funnier fanfic (even though it was supposedly meant to be serious)
MyLittleTwatface
2009-01-07 . chapter 1
There's no doubt you're a good writer. However, all the original hilarity that was My Immortal has been drained from it. I found your adaption dull, but well written. It breaks my heart to see Enoby no longer being flammed by pr3pz nd posrs hu r jelus of how gofik she iz. And where on earth was the loss of Enoby's virility? Shockingly un-goffik.
yes&yes
2008-12-31 . chapter 1
http://myimmortalrehost./
NotSoAnonymous
2008-12-29 . chapter 4
Lovely.
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