The story is fairly good, however, you use a lot of capital letters in the middle of a sentance. Good story though.

Its OK, one major complaint I have is the rateing. This should not be rated K+ I'd say T or maybe even MA. I'll keep reading and reviewing=D

Chapter 3 was also good, Py. Good work. I don't really understand the whole year 1872 thing. And I'm pretty sure that Ben Berrikens and Lord Andrew Berrikens are somehow related.

This chapter is pretty good, Py. I think that maybe one of the later chapters should sort of explain a few things. Like the whole Tamer Teams thing. Maybe explain how a Team is ranked. (Rank B, Rank A, etc.) And maybe you should explain each of your main character's past. Overall, it's a very good story so far.

Hey Py, this is great! I really liked it! Oh, and I knew you would make a fanfiction starring DORUmon! It's really cool. Good work! I'll be looking forward to next chapters! =]