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Reviews for: Falling
amsley
2007-11-16 . chapter 1
loved it! loved it! loved it!
The Confused One
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
Wow... This was beautiful. Wonderful prose. Poor Bobby. I just want to hug him. Just like Alex. I'm so glad he finally let her in and let her hug him. :) This is so amazing. :D Excellent. Fabulous. LOL
gorengal
2007-11-07 . chapter 1
Not bad for "kind of random and unbeta'd." :) I really liked the flashback conversation between Bobby and the priest, and how Bobby connected angels with Eames. Nice work.
RoleModel2
2007-11-07 . chapter 1
Great story. Absolutely loved it!!
emy
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
Wow. Totally loved it! Some of the sentences were fragmented though, so watch out for that. The story was so great though. It wasn't too angsty on either side and was very much in character.
Grenelle
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
Excellent story! I loved the visual and the prose was quite lovely.
moonstone2148
2007-11-06 . chapter 1
Hey there

Loved this - good descriptions and flow. You seem to have captured the characters well. - Perhaps more soon?

Take care, GG
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