Sounds interesting so far! I don't think I've read a story with both Bra and Pan as the main characters, let alone one with them going back in time to meet Bardock and the others. Lol, if I were the girls I'd probably try to make an appearance before Vegeta, hopping the current version might have some sort of new memory flashback and be able to tell Bulma when they are. Anyway, you've done a great job so far and I hope you'll end up continuing this sometime!

please write more on this story!

Hope you update soon! - Great story so far!

Amazing story! Update soon!

wow this is good please can you up date this story it is so good.

hey love you story and i can't wait to read more of it good luck!

update soon!

pleez make more to the story :):(

I love this story! I hope you don't leave this hangin' so update soon!

This is very interesting, I'm intriged about how it's going to continue.

Please update soon, I really like it this far.

Wow this story rox! And I'm not usually a fan of Pan and Bra(I'm a 100% Bardock fan, w00t! XD)! Anyways, you did an aweseome job! Except, you got some names wrong.

Plentor is Planthor, Orgos is Borgos, Ugesh is Shugesh, and Paragras is Paragus.

Update soon!

Gagawop Wuvs Yu!

-Kid Goku 13

update soon very good

apart from some spelling errors it was a very good story

please please update

i ok i really love these ideas so please so me and everyone a favour and write the next chapter please i have a feeling it is going to be good