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| fictionalcandie 2008-07-20 ch 1, | abuse... Oh, God. That was beautiful. So sad — heart-wrenching, really, and you actually made me cry this time — I haven't really stopped yet, actually. I think it's so crushing, partly because you do Weasleys so well and their agony is practically tangible, and that Molly's grief over Fred has GOT to be awful and painful, especially at his funeral. Also it's probably partly because of the mentions of George, alone for the first time in his life... it was so unfair that it was one of the TWINS to die, and leave the other to go on living. Just. Gah. SAD. Excellent, amazing fic. Fantastic imagery, as always, evocative in all the worst places (in a very, very good way, I mean), and generally not mawkish at all. |
| TheNightimeSky 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abuse-attempts to talk but cries- Fred! Wah..I think this is very very very very very good. |
| mustardgirl1128 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abusethat almost made me cry! It was one of the best Fred/funeral stories I've read. I LOVED it. Except...I dunno, for some reason it ruined the moment for me when she said "Bye" rather than "Goodbye" because goodbye seems so much more sentimental. but that's just me being picky, lol! =-) Otherwise, I loved it SO much. so good. |
| QtipKiwis 2007-11-16 ch 1, | abusei swear i teared up a bit... just a bit. beacuse, you know, i dont CRY. ;P interesting view point, not usual, but you write it well. |
| CaramelBoost 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseAww that was so sad and angsty! Amazing emotion, Ebony, you are seriously one of my favourite HP writers. Loved it! xox Carrie |
| dancegirl01mom 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseit was good. |
| Candeeta4u 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abusethat is true though; you know how you want to say sorry to someone but its too hard to, no, they have to leave and saying bye is even harder because apologies follow with something like acceptance or rejection while goodbyes always end in on way or another- cut off. |
| serindraxx 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseits sad. im glad you wrote it though. ~Serindraxx~ |
| Ella Bridi 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseI think I've said this already, but I feel like saying it again: you are an amazing writer! Everything was so sad, and beautiful and just so perfect! Really, I don't even know what else to say! It made me cry, but I love it! |
| kidwithwingz 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseKudos to you. That was really sad. I liked it, though. |
| tastethekiss 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuse*blubber* About halfway through, everything suddenly clicked, and I went, "Molly..." I feel like I need to have a good cry. This was wonderfully written. I could feel Molly's pain. I... Can't type anymore. *sob* |
| Bad Mum 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThis is absolutely beatiful. Definitely not mawkish, but definitely tear-jerking. I love how Molly wants to look her best for Fred, but won't wear makeup because he's never known her to wear it. The description of Fred's brothers standing together with a gap where he should be was heart-breaking. And the whole paragraph beginning "She looks away as her son, her fourth-born, is placed into the ground..." was amazing, especially the way Molly could tell the difference between Fred and George, and the description of George on his own at the end. Kudos! |
| saturndragon 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abusebeautifuly written and it brought a tear to my eye a fitting tribute to Fred and Molly |
| missuspadfootnmoony 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. I love all the little things you put in there. Though they were made up, you made it seem like it could have been true (i.e. freckles on hand and nose, etc.) Thank you. Fred's death was the hardest I cried throughout the book. I appreciate you doing this. |