Do me a favour and don't quote Chrono Trigger in Final Fantasy fanfiction.

This is a great story!

Hmm... this could be interesting... keep it going and we'll see what happens, eh? "Keep it up, kid!"

Squeal! _;;;; Yay! Celes owns, and so does Locke. Interesting way to introduce Daryll. Nice characterization. Write more!

This is pretty good so far but your moving WAY too fast. There wasn't enough description on Lana/Daryll, like how she met Celes and etc. And how did Locke get hurt? Its assumed that he had a run in with Kefka, but you should probably describe that scene more thouroghly or write what he had been doing over the past few months. I'll be looking forward to more chapters of this fic, especially about how Kefka was revived. Good luck! _