*sob* *sob* *sniff* *sniff* so sad... yet so romantic and beautiful

The sudden swap to first person "I" and "me" was rather unexpected. Try re-writing in entirely first-person :D You may be surprised how differently you'll have to write!

Surprisingly refreshing plot; Aang needs more backbone, IMO.

that was awsome im really fond of the ones were kataras maried to zuco then aang and the end part was sorta funny any way i really wish theres more to come so keep it ip :)

argh!! i just hate fanfics like these! Why can't people justlet Aang have some back boned and have him shun Katara like she did him?

Seriously, by that time Aang would've moved on, found him another girl and Katara would've been SOL

it was a tad bit rushed
but it was good. =]]