cali, hi! It's Rachel, what's up? we haven't talked in like forever!
anyway I review this 1. because It's very cute!.2 because I must apoligize, I'm sorry I didn´t realized it, I copied your tittle! do you remeber ''my last wish'' well I wanted to make a prequel, and I didn´t know which name It should have, the I thought about ''my last thought'' but I thought I have heard it before, and now I remeber...i´m sorry hope you don't mind!

kissed and please e-mail me!!

Rache

The words are good, but I think you tried a bit too hard to make it rhyme, so some of the words came out not rhyming at all. Still, that could be because of different accents (Mine is very much the Queen's English =]).

A good poem, and I especially like the part about the whole Mudblood name.

Please R&R mine!

Awsome. It's great