 poppyfields13 2007-11-07 . chapter 1OMG, you should have PMed me after you wrote this! I just happened to be browsing around when I found it! Ok, I have an exam on Friday but after that I will definitely get down to writing your Trason! Especially since you managed to do this so quickly! And it was not horrible! It was pretty good considering you are unfamiliar with/don’t really support the pairing, so I am impressed with you for that!
Favourite line: No matter how many mental barriers she put up in desperate attempts to block him out, he kept blasting through them like a wrecking ball. He destroyed all coherent thoughts, and she desperately attempting to string together the right commands to force her feet to walk. (it was just a great simile and well written line)
Anyways, this was ADORABLE! XD Although, it was sad to see that Martha thought she had to lose a bunch of weight to get Jason to love her. But Jason was just so awfully cute! The kiss was so sweet and fluffy.
LOL! I cannot believe you did that thing bout Kelsi at the end! EVIL! I could practically hear your little ‘Mwahahaha’. LOL JUST KIDDING!
THANK YOU!
-Poppy XOXOX |