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| Kakashis-First-Kiss 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was so sad! I've always loved Boga, and I give you many kudos for writing such a wonderful fic about her. Keep up the good work! |
| Sexy Scottish Accent 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseThis is very different... I like it a lot! Such emotions from Boga. This is very interesting! |
| gatehappy 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseThis is great! Very interesting! |
| Kaelir of Lorien 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseAmazing! I love how you make everything seem so obscure, yet clear at the same time for someone who knows what happens. I was very much reminded of the way a wolf might think, with packs and herdmates. My favorite line was "Do you have to keep doing that?" It adds a touch of humor to all the action. |
| Pharaohess 2007-11-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, wow. That's awesome. If anyone tells you different, I;m syaing this now - don't change a thing! Boga's thought process flows well, it's beautifully structured and the first person works wonderfully. Stunning. |