Aww...very nice! I am a Cloti fan (though not rabid as so many are!), and I really enjoyed this...there isn't very much fic about this period in their lives, and even less that is well-written, so this was wonderful to read...great work!

If you don't mind me asking, what is it about Cloti you dislike so much? I ask because I really enjoy mature discussions of this topic, which, like good Tifa fic, are very hard to find :)