I love this pairing too and this story. I had come across this on LJ a while ago but didnt finish for some reason..I think I may have forgotten where I saw that time..I will read it all again and this time all of it. I ought to be sleeping though..I'll read one more chapter then off to bed.


A/N's on this..you mentioned were in the army, had kid ect., that's cool...I do wonder and imagine what some of the authors are like in RL, how do you even find the time.. well hope you do, there's not enought ShuuRen love here..a couple of good new fics but they need updating..

I think I love you. This was so amazingly written. I hate pointless smut, and this definitely isn't a piece of work I hate. Thanks so much for writing this!! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. I could actually see something like this happening.

I really loved reading this! The first few chapters were filled with hot horny guy ahaha which of course i have no problem with ;) but then you absolutely blew me away with the amasing fight scene at the end! Really cute ending btw ;)
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I just came across your story today. I prob skipped over it in the past since I'm all about RenIchi but I LOVED this story! Oh, you did the angst so well, especially when it comes to Renji (poor RenRen!)!
I feel like I was lucky enough to find this late so I could get the completed version.
So much love and angst all around - and thank you for making Renji as sexy as he is! not enough peeps appreciate that uber hot shinigami!

((He now knew how he felt about Shuuhei; the kiss with Ichigo had opened his eyes. He also knew that he was willing to fight to keep him.))_This is an interesting story. The only part I have come across so far that isn't quite right to me is the part above.
You had Renji say he kissed Ichigo and it wasn't all he thought it would be. Well isn't that because he was kissing the hollow and not Ichigo? Nothing of the goodness that REnji loves about Ichigo is in the hollow. I would imagine the hollow's kisses would be well, hollow and empty compared to Ichigo's kisses.

ah, it's over, it was so good i almost didn't want it to end, i'm curious about the Kira/Kisuke pairing though, where'd the idea come from?

): poor Renji, i really love how much depth you give the characters though, and the way you write Shuuhei's OCD is very realistic, i have it too so i know how annoying it can be XD

Not bad, Renji got kinda out of character at the end though, definitly wouldn't have gotten that weepy.

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Corrections:

Renji could feel the spirit of the Chimera =shudder=.

A lithe figure =dropped down from= somewhere up above, =landing silently= beside the tall shinigami.

=Renji's lips quiked into a crooked half smile, but didn’t turn to look at his friend; he already knew what he would see. The berry-head would be standing with Zangetsu slung carelessly over his shoulder, other hand resting on his hip, his head cocked to the side in a well practiced show of the most outrageous arrogance in this world and the next. His eyes filled with that irritating mixture of confidence and danger. His lips would be set in that half frown-half sneer he always wore.=
(I removed the one sentence simply becuas eit sounded rather corny, and not something Renji would ever say or think.)

He would be breathtaking in =the= moonlight…

Ichigo snickered, “Last time I compliment you =asshole=.” (Just fits better I think)

The younger man took a few steps forward and Renji felt his reiatsu tense. (Unless you're making list you don't need to put a comma before the "and".)

Fuck, Renji thought, now I really can’t look at him. He’s gonna have those stupid, concerned, puppy dog eyes…

Fuck i just remembered I have homework!
This is a really good story though.

I loved this fic so much! You are absolutely amazing! Oo, you should do another fic that talks about how yumi and ikkaku got together

oh my god, chapter 17 was SO amazing...
I'm so scared of what's gonna happen next, cause I want Shuu and Renji to be together, period. I'm so excited and gonna read more as soon as I can! I know by now, how great your writing is, so I know I won't be disappointed!!
well done, i dunno what else to say

This wasn't one of my most loved chapter of this story, but it had the best ending possible!! amazing plot twists! and i swear, reading your words, i can almost see and hear Shuuhei in his 'wild' form, hehe! amazing!

I'm going to cry, I'm going to cry, I'm actually going to cry...

You made me cry!

This is touching, beautiful, intelligent, believable, funny, scary, hot and sweet. This is one of the most amazing fan-fics I have ever read. I have just sat here and read it all the way through. It's now half one in the morning and I just had to tell you what this means to me.

I have never considered this pairing before, but I think I won't be able to look at anything else. Shuuhei, Kira, Renji, you had them down all so well. I honestly thought at times that this was canon.

The storyline was fantastic, and if Tite Kubo ever reads this, he should be taking notes. God, I'm almost speechless at the quality of this fic. It breaks my heart that it ever has to end.

Please accept the heartfelt thanks of a girl for whom you have just made her week. Thank you so much for writing this!

I <3 ALL your stories. This is my second time reading this one and since I'm the crazy kinda person who reads this whole beast in one day I noticed a little Bishamon/Kazeshini continuity problem :D I know it doesn't come up much in the earlier chapters which is probably why its still there but I thought I would point it out.

And I love Obsessive Compulsive Shuuhei, hes just so cute.

I dont want to fill your reviews with mine over and over again but I'm shocked to see this chapter only has 1 review! Your story is really good so far. It's gonna take me some days to finish it though o.o

which is good :)