aw. victoire really does go off topic. i love it!

haha i like this chapter! niice!! i like how you put it in Victore's point of veiw, she'd not really in much. I just want to know, How old is she when she'telling all of these stories?...sorry if i missed something that told how old she is, i call myself blind sometimes because i fail to see stuff right in front of my face. lol

Victoire was so cute as the narrarator of this! She just seems like the most adorable thing ever! And I loved all the weddings, they were precious. Even the last one XD
Oh, and I love Eleri. In fact, I think she's the first OC I've actually liked a lot. Though I can't help it - she's so sweet :)

Aw, cute story.

That was great!! You should have Victoire do commentary on something else because this story is hystericsl. I loved the bit with ron and George, “Ron-c’mon,” “Where?” “Fireworks,” “But we haven’t had pudding yet!” “Tough! It won’t kill you,” that was awesome, poor Ron without pudding.

I know I had read most of this before, but I saw that you had added the last chapter, so I had to go back and read it all from the beginning again...
It was fantastic :D
I loved how you wrote it from Victoire's point of view, you nailed the 10-year-old mindset. And I've probably said this before when reviewing your other stories, but I love your character Eleri. She's perfect for Charlie, I was never content with him "marrying his dragons". :)

If I thought the last chapter was the best one, then this one was defintiely the funniest. Again, I love Victoire's narration, and there were so many funny moments- I loved the whole exchange when Fleur says 'You realise zat your muzzer is going to keell you, don’t you?', and also when Ron says that 'you'll be quizzed on it later'. Absolutely ah-mazing story!

This is by far the best chapter in your story- not that the others aren't good, but this one is amazing. I love when Victoire confinces George to marry Katie, because of Fred. It was sad, but a really brilliant moment. I love this whole story- even though I miss some of JK's pairings- because Victoire's narration is so perfect, and occasionally humorous as a child's view on all the weddings. Sorry for the long review, but this story was really fantastic, one of the best fanfics I've read!

gr8 story!

This was so funny. You've made me like Charlie a lot. He is so cool now!

Oh my god! That was so cute and lovely. I loved how you had it all described from a 10 year old Victoire. It was so sad and nostalgic but hilarious at the same. My favourite as well as Victoire's was Charlie's wedding. I just couldn't stop laughing when they were all trying to keep the secret. The part where that rude man intruded saying those things about Bill was also great. I loved how Fleur and him held hands under the table afterwards.
I enjoyed it a lot and I loved all the cute comments Victoire did throughout the story. Gosh I love that little girl and you wrote her so well! Your writting skills are awesome and you managed to get inside a ten-year old in a wonderful way. Congratulations!

Fantastic ending - I can't believe how long it's taken me to get round to reading it. I'm so behind on my fanfic reading! Anyway, it was lovely. Great job!

This is really good. You're talented at writing stories from a 10 year old's perspective. Do you ever plan on writing more stories from her perspective?

Nice story. Well written for a ten year old. She would have the beginnings of a writer I think, especially when I compare this to the 500 word essay my ten year old son had to write for his black belt test. Writing is definitely not his forte'.

I actually like that you put Katie and George together. I realize that people don't usually marry who they go out with as 15 year olds, however, George and Angelina has bothered me for some reason. And yes, I have read some well written plausible stories for how they got together that didn't seem like George was with his dead brother's girlfriend.

I have enjoyed several of your stories, even if I didn't leave a review. Sometimes it is difficult to leave a review due to not wanting to be made fun of by my husband. (Lame excuse, I know) Keep up the good writing.

Aww, that's great! So cutre, and sad, and funny! Perfect, thanks for writing it. x