Nice!!

Great story, it's cute.

I'm not sure whether I know the song or not... who sings it?

Anyway, keep on writing!

~sara

No, I liked how you tried what you could to make it sound like the show. In fact, what's the name for that dictionary? See you soon.

I love how you used that song. It is one of my favs. so I love it to bits. This is really sweet. It is cool that River knows.

Jenny is the chick from the song lyrics, right? And Mal has every right to tell her how he feels. Inara needs to SHUT-UP, LISTEN, QUIT RUNNING, AND BE HONEST, because they're driving everyone crazy (viewers and the crew) with their immature behavior. Good use of song... although, we know, she is the one who eventually makes the call for help.

Who is Jenny? That part just didn't seem to have anything to do with the rest of it and why does Mal have to be the one to tell Inara anything? She is the one who keeps running away even if it is from something neither one of them are yet ready to admit to feeling. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me

Lovely story really.
Mal and Inara were so meant to be, but I can't stand her. She drives me crazy.

Good story! I liked it.