A sad story but I must say:
Dang that was good!

Depressing, yes. Poetic, Very.

Hope you can make another one with a positive ending. It's too sad seeing our lovely Goddess be depressed like that.

well that was...depressing :/

There is a simple saddness to this short story. Its a good plot line, and I think it would have made a good longer story.

This is a sad piece, but I love the way you write.

aw.. I love it. It's so sweet yet sad.

Beautifully saddening. It was great.

Very good.

Oh...very nice. Very poetic. Simple, sweet, and yet serious. Lovely!

I thought this was pretty good. Even though I have never been one to dance, and in fact I do not know how to dance, I have always love scenes in Anime where people dance. Anyways, I though this was a good insight into Haruhi's character, and I really liked the ending, I could really see her in here room dancing with no one(does she live alone or what?) If I had to critique I guess I would say that sometimes it was a little confusing if Haruhi was the narrator or if someone else was. Overall very good.

this, was way too deep. i really loved this. thank you.

Aw it was sweet. though a little OTT. but nice, I liked reading from Haruhi's POV for a change. :)
Keep it up!

Very sweet, I liked it.

I like this generally. Here is some criticism, though.

I don't think Haruhi would feel the need to practice dancing. A precocious prodigy, that one. I also don't think the way you've defined "extraordinary" quite fits, although there's no conflict with Haruhi's motivation because after all she said quite clearly that the reason she's into the extraordinary is because it's more fun. I agree with the general premise that Haruhi would find dancing fun, but might hesitate at forcing Kyon into it due to the implications.

Also, the last line. Seems out of place somehow. "keep her warm at night" seems a bit base, a bit too simple. If that were all Kyon and partners in general were supposed to do, I don't think it'd be too difficult for her to prove that she isn't really "all alone in this world".

good fic, 5/5. btw i would dance with haruhi lol L8R

i liked that, a little bit of kyonxharuhi (the best couple in that anime) nice ideas.