Mhmm, yes there is a deep connection that we see between them in the anime. Wow when you say short you mean it lol xD either way it was good and to the point, tho if would be great if you developed this further, i'd love to read it if you ever consider the idea ^_^ oh, great job btw =3

ugh... incest... but I gotta give you the thumbs up. I cannot make a story short like that. It's impossible for me... u I want to write a story now on TT.

Short, but sweet. You've made Aya love complex between Souichiro and Maya very powerful, even with but a few words. Maybe you could write a fic that further expands on a romance between the Natsume sisters. I'm pretty sure you could pull it off.

That's it from me. Peace.