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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Sara was fussing in the locker room. |
| Fiction Trouble 2008-06-12 ch 1, | abuseOkay Miss Spoon or Can I call you Bluey for short? LOL loved the story and I think Sara would've gotten away with murder. Everyone (cept Enid) would've covered for her saying he attacked her or something. I like that she had to leave for her own good than hurting Gil the way she didn't in the real one. |
| inonolimits00 2007-12-04 ch 1, | abuseAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHAAH... yeah i think you got enough of that in my last review and plus i wouldnt want you to blame me agian for you amazing send buttoin skills :D OH BURN! lol jk ;D i think you got YAHTZE on this one lol omg i swear i was about to die. when i read the summary im like happy CD? is that possible? but yes yes it is ;D lol i was reaing and by the way "If I ever need to know where to go to get a great deal on head wax, then I’ll talk to the man, Sara. Until then…I’m unreachable.” omg i swear a corus of karate kid came on in my brian WAX ON WAX OFF WAX ON WAX OFF lol yeah but in ecklies case im prety sure he should pick off cause god i swear if that head was any shinier i think i could be able top see through to his brain hahahahah ( if he hass one) :D sorry im haviong one of those really wierd days where you just are all over the place lol omg when i read when the decripped hilter woman was descriptign sara as haughty i was like did this elderly receptionist just call sara a hottie? then i reread it im like oh im an idiot NO its cause im having a bad day yes lets blame it on that not the fact that im challenged haha i dont know why but when his plus wasnt there i swear i laughed harded then i did in the whoel story maybe its cause ive whatched him be an ass for three years lol they almost had sex in his office? i was like no its not possible that this story HAS EVERYTHIGN IN ONE IS IT? lol jk |
| LielieS 2007-11-15 ch 1, | abuseYou just HAD to put that lil' horny Griss scene into it, didn't you? xD... I loved it! People should make you more gutter minded, the combination of dirty + humor ( in your case that is) is so funny and well-written, I love you. Anyways, you yourself would be a great CSI if you every think of doing it, seriously. You've got it all figured out, I mean, not killing someone or how to 'clean up' but just as how they do it and how well you actually wrote it, I just.. love it. You should write more of this, especially involving a dead Ecklie. I mean, who doesn't want that? But that probably means less sarcasm-fun between Griss and him, oh bugger. So, conclusion; I'd really, really loved to read it. It really put a smile on my face and made my day :). I loved the lil' dirtyness you put into it and also the ending with the ass-watching. The secretary Enid, so hilariously written, I just can't imagine someone doing the same as you (except if they copy it and post it on their name and if they do that, I'll kick them in the nuts).. you're unique Jess, you really are. Keep it up!! Peace ;) |
| BellaDonnaButterfly 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseYay! Dead Ecklie! what a wonderful happy funny way for saying goodbye to Sara. I wish it was gonna be that way for real but I'm sure we'll all be crying from the real thing. Loved the ending of her yelling at him to stop staring at her butt. ahh geek love what a wonderful thing. loved it, another great one. Brandy |
| luvinx 2007-11-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseOmigod! Freakin' hilarious. Not that it was very easy to pick out a favorite part (because there was just so much funniness), but for some reason, one part just made me literally laugh my ass off! "As soon as he got outside, he headed for where Sara was. “Sara?” he called out quietly. “About damn time!” she snapped. “You know how many people walked by here, looking at your car like ‘gee, I wonder what kind of crap that psycho is pulling tonight?’” Seriously, I couldn't stop laughing, imagining this in my head. Knowing the weirdo things Gil does. Nice job! Definitely what the doctor ordered! |
| sarapals with past50 2007-11-12 ch 1, | abuseI am STILL laughing! You need to add this one to the CSI/CBS website, let everyone laugh before Thursday! |
| MSCSIFANGSR 2007-11-11 ch 1, | abusehehehehehhehehehehhehe...sorry i can't stop laughing great work...:) chauncey |
| JerseyJunk 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseyay, dead Ecklie! i like him best when he's dead. :] |
| CJS-DEPPendent 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseI have to say that that was possibly THE funniest story i have EVER read for CSI! You have me in tears here from laughing so freakin' much! Keep it up...I love all your humour stories, they make everything seem better, even on the day I first see the promo for Sara's leaving... |
| no1duranie 2007-11-08 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! Absolutely Brilliant - very well done and a massive thank you for sharing x |
| BrookeGreene 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseI'm pretty sure you're the only blue spoon that can even FEEL happy... :p I guess that's why you're the great one. Sara... killed Ecklie... wow. It would suck to accidentally kill someone, I always feel really sorry for the ones on the show that didn't really do anything wrong. It wasn't her fault that Ecklie has so many awards in his office! So far this is the only fic I've read about Sara leaving that didn't make me want to hunt down Jorja Fox and stab her in the back, then stab myself. Congrats. ;) The one thing I don't get is why they aren't allowed to get married. How come they can be together but they can't be married? |
| patella 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abusespoon's gaining luster...the greatness and humor in your writing just improves with each peice oh boy...what wouldn't i give to see that this thrusday night..lol |
| sugarXcouture 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseOmigod, i just died laughing reading that! hahahahahahaha...soz! please continue with this story, i love it! |
| theyHAUNTme 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat story...YAY dead Ecklie! He's SO annoying! Thanks for the laugh, and I hope you post more funny stuff soon! |