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| mandy-san 2008-10-02 ch 6, | abusethat's pretty nice! I'm not a big fan of realistic fanfiction, but i'd say it's really well done :) |
| PureHFA 2008-09-19 ch 7, | abuseYay! i was wondering what had happened... |
| Xeno Major 2008-09-19 ch 7, | abuseThis is a great story, I think that everything is good so far. But, you should clarify on the kidnapping scene, because it left me going, "wait, what?". Very confusing. Love it! |
| GoldenKitsuneHime13 2008-09-07 ch 7, | abuseah man that's some bad luck u had! well hope everything turns out well for you! hope u update soon! :D |
| XspazzyX 2008-09-07 ch 7, | abusewow! i really like the snake! cant wait for the next chappie to see what Gaara-nii and the others do yupp yupp! =(^_^)= spazzy |
| Trixy Fox 2008-09-03 ch 5, | abuseOK I know I am poking the bear with a stick on this but for supposedly high level hackers to be exchanging possibly extremely sensitive information with each other via MSN is almost ludicrous. I understand a majority of readers will probably never bat an eye at it but even I your standard e-pirate would never use MSN to exchange info with another because of all the codded in tracking and monitoring software the gov uses to find "Potential Threats" Just do a little research on Promise software and you will see. Sorry again for poking the bear with the stick but it just bugged me. |
| NekoDoodle 2008-09-03 ch 6, | abuseDarwin theory... evolve or die out... harsh |
| Miss Finnish 2008-08-31 ch 6, | abuseUPDATE!! UPDATE! AND UPDATE! I LOVE IT :3!! I know I've probably started reading this fic a thousand times BUT never did I finish it before. so now that I have, I have only one comment: I CANT WAIT FOR MORE! I'm truly in LOVE with the fic! :D I cant wait to see what will happen now that akatsuki found naruto and just before naruto & gaara could kiss > |
| Kyuuki-sama 2008-08-21 ch 6, | abuseNOO!! The most evil of all evil: CLIFFHANGER!! You are very evil when you does that. T_T Good story. And without doubt, that was Akatsuki, who else dress in black cloaks with red clouds in Naruto? I don't include Team Hawk and Cosplayers, even if they do to... Now I want to guess the identetys of the guys who kidnapped my favorite hacker named Naruto! Skilled redhead: Sasori. Who else goes around with a blondie that makes sculptures? And is THAT creapy... -shudder- Blondie with photo: Deidara. I don't know anyone else that makes sculptures and travels around with a redhead. Cursing man: Let me guess... Hidan. Or else I didn't read the curses but just added them in my mind. Other guy: I guess on Kakuzu, seriosly, who else walks around with a cursing maniac to a partner? Mohaha! ...now I want to read next chapter... T__T Stupid cliffhangers of DOOM. -Picks out flaming chainsaw- I'm going out for hunting of cliffhangers to destroy! Have fun! And I hope you are fine! |
| pirateXfangirl 2008-07-21 ch 6, | abusenice |
| lunarmidnightwolf 2008-07-12 ch 6, | abuseoh god u have to continue asap before i die of antisapation this chap was awsome and looks like little naru is getting alittle close to garra lol well the chap was awsome and it seems as if things are changing i don't know though it seems as if Orochimaru was slightly a good guy seeing as he taught her self defence but also the bad guy cause he's the one who's using her as well as got her into trouble gosh i may have a diffrent out look at Orochimaru soon oh dear well thanks for the chap and i hope u update soon! |
| DemonCurse 2008-07-06 ch 6, | abuseO.o wow it's good but the rhymes suck they sound like barney wrote them. But you are a good writer I'll give you that. |
| Meia-Noite 2008-07-05 ch 6, | abusea very interesting take on naruto. very well-written though, with naruto's character gradually developed and exposed to us readers through the flashbacks & how she behaves in her new high school. kurome is adorable despite being 13 ft long ;). naruto's attitude isn't the most amiable, but i find it endearing all the same. the exerpt from orochimaru's memories is touching in a twisted kind of way - it's good to know that villains have hearts too. it makes stories less flat. i look forward to seeing how this turns out. |
| oracale 2008-05-20 ch 6, | abusethis is the first fem naruto that i have ever liked. please keep it up i love it. oh when is naruto going to figure out that gaara is a fellow hacker? |
| Narutolover 2008-05-05 ch 3, anon. | abuseKun is for a guy |