Great story so far, I'm really looking forward to Tom finding out about his mother and grandfather! Hope you update soon :)

this is a really good story and i am so glad that u r continuing it!

catwoman43

This is such a good story and I can't wait until you post more of it! I love your Tom in this. I also like your Abraxis.

Anyways, I can't wait until he's able to be back at Hogwarts and I hope you update this great story soon! : D

I'm surprised that they're not in the middle of the Blitz (the Phoney War didn't last much of the summer season, and Tom would have been at Hogwarts for most of it). I keep having this bizarre vision of Tom's orphanage being evacuated, and him getting split up and being put on the same train with those darn Pevensie kids...

Good chapter, though.

Absolutely loved your story!!

Tom Riddle Jr. is definitely one of the most complex characters in the series and I really enjoy reading about his years at Hogwarts.

Please, update soon^^

Cool idea for a fic! I like it already.

What you could do if you repost it somewhere else is have each year grouped into one chapter. It'd look smaller, but the chapters would be much fuller. Just a thought...

Uno question: if Tom lives near Riddle, then why didn't he know he was a Muggle? Also, if Riddle lives in Little Hangleton (sp?), how can Tom live near him and the train station? I thought Tom's orphanage was in London, but that might be fandom talking.

That was another good chapter. So, the first year is over at last, isn't it? Nicely written, really, good job.

This chapter was just great! I only hope that you will update faster.

Great story! I love reading about Voldemort's younger years, and you tell the story quite well. The actions of the young Tom Marvolo Riddle match Voldemort's personality quite well, and your grammar is impeccable.
I also love the other first years. It took me a while, but I love how you included Sirius's uncle Alphard, who became a Muggle sympathizer. Of course, Walburga Black has to be there, too. I have nothing but good things to say about this story. Please update soon!
~Sam

the story is excellent as it is! just go on, keep updating asap!

Excellent idea! And keep going. All of your stories are brilliant. BTW, keep updating ASAP!

very nice...the prank was a great idea.

I've only read chapter one but i like the tone of this! I have an Abraxas Malfoy in my fanfic too =) Im a big fan of Tom Riddle Jnr fics and think im going to like this one!

hmm...I wonder what the word is that Manethon is mouthing ;)

If I'm right, I can't wait for the next chapter!

As I am not adept at alchemy or the study of or about it, I can say that I am about as intrigued as Tom is over this new development in immortality. I do wonder how this Manethon happened to live for centuries.

It makes me wonder whether this is Tom's first exposure to the Horcrux concept.

And how eerie, being communicated with so silently. It is clear that the past masters of magical power and immortality are more than willing to hand the torch to Tom, something that I, alternatively, believe would be likely.

I should also add that I love the way you describe Tom's mindset on his magical skills. It is his will that drives things to be the way they are. Beautifully described.

Well, update when you can. I look forward to more.
~*Anaria*~