*giggles* Way to go! You really kept Mirage in character (something that seems very hard for most authors) and you certainly revealed a very playful side that he does not show very often. I love the concerned, innocent Bumblebee at the end - and the all-knowing Ratchet telling him not to worry. Oh, so very priceless!

Loved it! Mirage is such an evil little sneak. XD

Aw hell that was good. Put a huge smile on my face, thank you. :D

f. X

A definate new pairing for me...and it was awesome XD

plz tell me you plan on continuing this story i lmao at blue and bees situations

never would have thought mirage would be the naughty one. that was a very good fic. hope you have a new fic up soon.

This was awesome the first time I read it. Was still awesome the second time. And now, on the third read-through, it still left me grinning stupidly...

ROFL Freaking hilarious!