This is an excellent story and written very well! The characteristics of Lister are just as you would expect at that age and the ending was very thoughtfull and conclusive. Very good job, I completely enjoyed reading this. Thank You.

Wow, you really know how to write! This is excelent stuff, well written and characterised. How cute is Lister!! lol i love that youve given him all that determination and courage - very touching too! Well done =]

Crimson xx

I quiet enjoyed that story. Showed more about the possibilities behind Listers past. Your story was well writen and easy to read.

“I just thought that I’d—I’d try something new today!” - I got so sick of those four words when I was slaving away there!

Fantastic story, ickle Listy is so damned cute! I just want to squeeze him to death! Well, maybe not death but you get the picture!

I now feel wholly appreciated and important! I have a use!

You need to write more! That's an order solider, not a suggestion! :D