this was a cute chapter and I am really glad that they are both realizing their feelings for each other. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

lol I love the part where they sew the doll clothes.XD That was too funny. Then Axel got cut. I don't see how they were bleeding that badly. I've jabbed myself with a needle countless of times, though they might be doing it harder. At any rate, I really loved this chapter! So heart warming!!^_^ I can't wait to read more!!

I'm loving this story so much, it's so cute!
And Axel is so different from the usual cocky, slightly asshole-ish Axel lol It's so good I can't stand it!
The only thing I hate is Sora and co.; I'd punch them all in the mouth so they'd shut up, it's so annoying how they can't take a friggin hint to shut up! Then again...my friends are exactly the same...and I still want to punch their lights out. I just find it such a disregard for a person and their privacy it pisses me off! *rant rant rant* lol

Anyway, I hope you continue this and your other loveable stories soon, you write a memorable Roxas and Axel and I hope everything goes well for you in the new year.

AW ^w^

I just couldn't help smiling while I read this!

I luv Roxas' personality in this story and I luv Axel too. And they are so cute together! :D

They give each other inspiration ^w^ Aw

And OMG I just luv Marluxia in this. He is so freaking funny! :D He just luvs messing with Roxas' life. XD It's so funny. XwX

And now I'll just have to wait for the next update.

So please update soon! :D I can't wait to read more!

Seriously, I just luv this story :D

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

Aw ^w^

He luvs Roxas' dazed and day dreaming expressions! :D

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

OMG! :D

I seriously luv this story. I kept on talking about it to my sister.

Ah ^w^

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

I luv Marluxia! :D He's so freaking weird and random which makes him so funny and it makes him fun to read about! XD :D

I luv the fact that he feels like he is watching some drama! XwX

Haha, lovely chappie! :D

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

Ah, I seriously luv this story! :D

I'm so telling my friend about it, because we usually tell each other about stories we read.

Very nice chapter, Roxas is a lil' jelous though :D XD

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

I luv this story!

What an idea! :D I luv art, it's like my fav subject!

Ah ^w^ ! I gotta read more.

From: Seeker-Of-The-Heart

oh i loved it. the images you create with your words are always so...amazing. can't wait to read more of this wonderful story you've made. i hope you had happy holidays!

<3 Ahlex

loved it =D
this chapter was so sweet, and your writing truly is inspiring ^^
thanks for the update!

Ahaha this is awesome! x3 The plots really neat, I love Axel as an art student(he does look artistic) and I love how you write Roxas! Marluxia is also a load of fun x3

Best Christmas present ever i loved it the whole time i was like ". . . AW! 030" it was so good and i cant wait for the rest (not to mention wen they realize their in love~) so pleae do your best to upsate soon im seriosly begging here *gets down on hands and knees* PLEASE!

wow this fic is really cute!

I hope you start to update it regularly! It's really good.


They need to hurry up and get out of denial! lol

thanks for the update!
i really liked this chapter, cuz now i see where exactly ur going! (with roxas)
theres more to roxas's character than i thought :3
i dont mean to brag but i'm one kind of artist too (although not a versatile one...) i've bin experiencing blocks for over two years now, since i moved to an awfully boring place, but at times i get these inspirations... just like axel. infact, most of the time my inspiration comes from kingdom hearts! after playing the new KH game (358/2 days) i've felt this urge to draw axel, roxas and xion looking at kingdom hearts... and i did. it came out pretty well and i'm thanking tetsuya nomura for it!
The story of kingdom hearts, especially the parts concerning roxas and hence axel are very inspiring. infact after reading this chapter i'm feeling a little differnt... i really wanna draw smthing now! and also write maybe!
thanks for giving me this inspiration. its artists like you that make this world livelier!
cant wait for the next chap!
P.S. I know u hear this often but ur writing style is lovely :3 elegant... smooth... gracious. almost palpable!