*opens and shuts mouth* I... I don't... *blank stare* I... *shakes head in shock and slowly backs out of the room*

WTF! what is this a crack fic? the winchester dont even act like that! and im pretty sure dean wouldnt say "awsome" in some overly dramatic way either, maybe in a sarcastic way but totally not dramatic. dude, my god, it made me laugh, its funny, but so out of character for the people! see yha

Ok - so can I totally assume that this is supposed to be crack!fic? Cause, if it isn't, it sucks. But since I'm assuming it is - its sorta funny. Seriously. Great job on the crack!fic. I totally needed some !crack! in my life.

OMG, I love this story! Dean and Chase are so hot. I think you should right more about Tritter raeping people because he is pretty hot too. He should raep Sam. And then Dean can come in and be like OMG NO and then he will beat up tritter because Dean is the only one who can raep SAm (he looks like a girl too ). Write that next plz!

I honestly love this story and have no idea why people are putting it down.

It's obviously canon in so many ways. I will provide examples in the form of a bulleted list for easy reading:

*Sam and Dean are brothers

*Dean and Sam travel a lot

*Sam and Dean investigate the Supernatural

*Chase and House work at Princeton-Plainesboro Teaching Hospital

*Dean blasts AC/DC

*Chase looks like a girl

*Chase has blond hair

*Chase's first name is Robert

*Sam and Dean stay in a lot of motels/hotels

Gosh, this story is truly an epic masterpiece and should be regarded as such. Thank you for writing this.

Seriously.

Dean will never say anything along the lines of 'Awesome'. He'll come up with some crazy remark, but never something like that.

And seriously.

Chase will never just AGREE to a drink like that. Especially with someone he doesn't know.

AND. Chances are, the Winchesters won't get a case wrong. The amount of damned research they do before visiting a site is clearly way more than some silly old rumor look up.

None of them are in character, what kind of crappy plot is that?

Honestly, this is he worst fic I have ever read. First off, rape is not something you joke about. Second, was there anyone in character? Third, it was moving extremely fast, with no plot whatsoever. Seriously. I've read pure smut with more plot to it.

OH GOD I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

I LOVE YOU MORE THAN RAPE

I don't really know what to say other then it was bad. You could have something if you stayed in character and weren't so...weird with the plot if there even is one.

This is odd.

POSSESSED WITH THE LOVE OF RAPE MAYBE

I don't even know what to say other than "wow."

It's just flat out poorly written.

Um. Yeah.

Well, first off, get to know your characters before you write. Second, not looking for a beta before posting if you have been told you need one is laziness, pure and simple.

Third. And this is the big one. Stop joking about rape. Period. It's not funny, and joking about it just... well, I'm embarrassed for you quite frankly, that no-one has thought to explain that there are some jokes you don't tell unless you know your listeners/readers really well and - and here is the important bit - they know you.

You might not have intended it to be, but your fic is a moral vacuum, with characters recognisable by name only as they bear little to no resemblance to the characters in either show.

Please, find a beta, or failing that at least use the spell check on whatever word processor you use and set it to check grammer too.

Just as a last note, I believe posting to 2 categories is a no-no on this site. Check the rules.