aww, that was so sad! poor allen-chan! wah...^.^x

Geez, I'm surprised Allen was able to shrug all that abuse and neglect off. I think a large percentage of kids would be damaged by this. Sadly, kids are still tossed away, although they have more resources to turn to that kids in the 19th century didn't have.

Oh, this was so touching - reading the story from Allen's perspective makes it even sadder, somehow, but better because he really was safe finally.

Absolutely beautiful. It made me feel both sadness and happiness. It's one of those rare fics that really "sucked me in". I have read Mana couple of times (such an amazing fic) and this is a great companion piece to it. I think it was even more powerfull when it was told from Allen's POV. I really like it that you don't describe too much. He's a child and doesn't understand everything that has happened to him. This somewhat simple way of telling things is very effective and really makes the reader to sympathize with him. Great work!

Gorgeous story... if I can describe it that way. xD
But very heart warming at the end.

aww,.,. that was really emotional,.,.
this was part of the Mana story,.,. just that it was in Allen's point of view! :D
wonderful! :)

The only thing I can really think of is: cute.

Aw! Reading it in Allen's POV is really something! I really like your writing style! It's beautiful *_* and I love how it brings life into the character. The way you wrote Allen's thoughts and feelings really affected me like how I felt extremely sad when Allen got left alone with the garbage and about the 'monsters'. But I felt overjoyed in some scenes such as when Mana named Allen =3 I think this has really helped me understand your Allen more. His perspective is very interesting!

Heh, very nice~ It's interesting to see all from Allen's perspective O__O; Though I really do like seeing it from other peoples perspective too. The way you incoperated the details from Mana to Found is really smoth too~ VERY VERY WUNDERFUL~

T_T Poor Allen..

That was nice; it's great seeing this from Allen's point of view as well. I loved his confusion with Mana and seeing his thoughts about what was happening to him. As well as him being drugged; which in itself was amusing. Very sweet.

It would almost be nice to see this continued with other choice scenes from Allen's POV; like the festival, the kiss, or even the train scene. Not the entire story of course, but just have a tidy little set in one place. ^_^

This was so beautiful...I loved the way you displayed Allen's feelings throughout this oneshot. It even made me cry. ='] Great job on this! ^-^

Dude, that was just amazing and beautiful. it was almost like poetry.

Oh my god. Wow. That was amazing! I'm almost speechless! I loved everything about it! I'm definitely going to go read 'Mana' now. You write so well! Everything about the story was incredible! The way you were all vague with sensitive subjects but made it obvious about what you were talking about- it was just- great. You did a great job and I'm sure Mana's just as good. I really enjoyed reading this and I can't wait to read the story it goes with! d-(^.-)z

Beautiful.. I love traumatic stories with amazingly happy endings...so cute!! Allen...

Aw...That warmed my heart, it really did. :3 Keep up the amazing oe-shots-- they are a nice change.