 Sculllyga 2009-07-02 . chapter 1The triangle of these three is always interesting |
 raerobgal 2008-09-06 . chapter 4UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! I cant wait until you add more to your story, so P-L-E-A-S-E update ASAP! I love the plot :)
raerobgal |
 raerobgal 2008-09-06 . chapter 30.0 Red X kissed her! What'll Robin do if he finds out? OMG this is amazing! I love how this story is going :) I think its really cool how you use Red X and Raven's fighting in a context as if they're dancing. I like the sound of what Raven's morotcycle looked like - I want one like that lol. |
 raerobgal 2008-09-06 . chapter 2Robin! Tell Raven you love her! Please?!?! :D hehe. Uh-oh Red X is back again... |
 raerobgal 2008-09-06 . chapter 1Oh Red X knows that Robin leaves his stomach defenseless lol. That was a really good chapter, great job :) |
 paula2284 2008-07-12 . chapter 4omg! UPDATE ASAP
it's really good
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 writingtitan 2008-06-22 . chapter 4Loved it! please update! |
 Blackjay 2008-06-14 . chapter 3yay! a slightly longer chapter! this was a very interesting chapter. man if Robin saw that, he would be so jelouse! hehe |
 Blackjay 2008-06-14 . chapter 2haha! i like "ah...man i just finished fixing my hair from the last time we founght him." its funny. |
 Blackjay 2008-06-14 . chapter 1pretty intense here. and i dont know why you would say bring the flames. cuz anyone with sensible taste would like this! |
 liliac gurl 2008-04-16 . chapter 4aw :( i was ready to see robin have a hissy fit cos' rae rode his bike lol...Dam you wriers block :( |
 Kami No Koukyo 2007-12-19 . chapter 3coolness you should let this be a rae/redx one |
 DarkGirlRavenGrayson 2007-11-29 . chapter 3very nice. great chapter x has kissed her and now she knows his feelings! great job update soon!
and since ur story is currently untitled, maybe i can help you with that. i'll think of some ideas and PM you later.
ur friend
-DGRG14 |
 DarkGirlRavenGrayson 2007-11-28 . chapter 2omg girl great short paragraph. i wanna see more! will slade figure out that robin likes raven? will he take her? will x tell raven he likes her? will robin? who will she chose!
update soon! right now!
ur friend
-DGRG14 |
 liliac gurl 2007-11-27 . chapter 2wo i really like this story ...write on :D |