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Sculllyga
2009-07-02 . chapter 1
The triangle of these three is always interesting
raerobgal
2008-09-06 . chapter 4
UPDATE SOON PLEASE!! I cant wait until you add more to your story, so P-L-E-A-S-E update ASAP! I love the plot :)

raerobgal
raerobgal
2008-09-06 . chapter 3
0.0 Red X kissed her! What'll Robin do if he finds out? OMG this is amazing! I love how this story is going :) I think its really cool how you use Red X and Raven's fighting in a context as if they're dancing. I like the sound of what Raven's morotcycle looked like - I want one like that lol.
raerobgal
2008-09-06 . chapter 2
Robin! Tell Raven you love her! Please?!?! :D hehe. Uh-oh Red X is back again...
raerobgal
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
Oh Red X knows that Robin leaves his stomach defenseless lol. That was a really good chapter, great job :)
paula2284
2008-07-12 . chapter 4
omg! UPDATE ASAP
it's really good
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writingtitan
2008-06-22 . chapter 4
Loved it! please update!
Blackjay
2008-06-14 . chapter 3
yay! a slightly longer chapter! this was a very interesting chapter. man if Robin saw that, he would be so jelouse! hehe
Blackjay
2008-06-14 . chapter 2
haha! i like "ah...man i just finished fixing my hair from the last time we founght him." its funny.
Blackjay
2008-06-14 . chapter 1
pretty intense here. and i dont know why you would say bring the flames. cuz anyone with sensible taste would like this!
liliac gurl
2008-04-16 . chapter 4
aw :( i was ready to see robin have a hissy fit cos' rae rode his bike lol...Dam you wriers block :(
Kami No Koukyo
2007-12-19 . chapter 3
coolness you should let this be a rae/redx one
DarkGirlRavenGrayson
2007-11-29 . chapter 3
very nice. great chapter x has kissed her and now she knows his feelings! great job update soon!

and since ur story is currently untitled, maybe i can help you with that. i'll think of some ideas and PM you later.

ur friend
-DGRG14
DarkGirlRavenGrayson
2007-11-28 . chapter 2
omg girl great short paragraph. i wanna see more! will slade figure out that robin likes raven? will he take her? will x tell raven he likes her? will robin? who will she chose!

update soon! right now!
ur friend
-DGRG14
liliac gurl
2007-11-27 . chapter 2
wo i really like this story ...write on :D
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