Oh, wow. I loved this chapter, cant wait for the next one!

HOT! This is great. Thank you for writing a non sappy MurakixTsuzuki fic. Could you post the next chapter soon, pretty please?

Very Sad! Will wait to see what happens. Again, quite sad but maybe it'll turn around for Muraki.

aww poor Tsuzuki >.< this was really good .
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Damn. I feel really bad for Tsu now, and poor Watari to have to listen to that! I wouldn't put it past all the shinigami to gang up and go on a man-hunt. It's was really good though. Made me feel icky after, but it was very well written. When you write something like this, icky-ness if a compliment from me. Keep up the good work!

This is so good. Poor Tsuzuki. It is sad but I just love Muraki and Tsuzuki together. They make the best stories.

yay! such a lovely story. You have done well yourself, a thousand roses for you!(jitsuwa, I hate roses.)
I am really enjoying this story because I am a fan of any dark, unhappy story. So, don't feel depress.
oh yeah, i can't wait for the other P.O.V. I wonder what Muraki had in mind.

This is good. I love how u have the characters. Very dark, but dark sometimes is good. Can't wait for Muraki's POV.

i felt so sorry for tsuzuki. and the ending was such a heartbreaker to know that if muraki hadn't done what he did. he would and could have had tsuzuki without breaking a sweat. it's such a depression story but the story was still wonderful. to bad it is only atwo part story. oh well, i look forward to see what is going on inside of muraki's head now that he has done the dirty deed to his beloved.

waa, I wish this could be longer than a 2 part oneshot, meaning, c`mon Muraki just has to pamper his sweet little Tsuzuki, especially in such gentle condition, Anyways, disregarding my idyllistic ravings,
I think you`ve caught Murakis nature good, in fact - the way he was - ruthless, evil, and, yeah, in fact, a rapist.