Saa...not bad for non-native speaker! Intriguing notion...can't wait for more! Hope your vacation is going well!

that was pretty good!

this is REALLY interesting

and of course the fact that i lke both harry potter and sailor moon helps '_'!

so get that next chapter out!

NOW!

cool!

Yea!

That's good. I like the Elios in Harry Potter thing. Keep writing!

please write more. this story is great!

i really think that this is an interesting idea to put those three together!

and i always prefer fic that describe the relationship between sirius and harry.

hope that you will post up soon

Awesome story. I think your English is very good and your story was well written. Keep on writing.:)

Oooh...this seems like an interesting fic! Please write more! And your writing is great, don't worry about it .