if you're going to be sorry, be sorry for finishing like that lol more please ;)

Don't be sorry for writing this thing of beauty, my friend. Excellent job! ;)

Hot! Great little read.

Sorry for what? That was good, you have a knack for this! :)

Er, that was awesome...? Wrong but so right? Like a drug or something-...I'm gonna stop talking now.

So, I read this last night at around one o'clock in the morning. I was too tired to leave a review at the time, but now I just want to say its... WELL DONE! You write Royai beautifully. This little one-shot is sweet, rather steamy, and so perfectly in character. I can definitely picture their first date going this way. Thanks so much for sharing!

Love from

Lyny Angell

Seriously, what are you sorry about? This was amazing and just so freaking HOT! I pratically drooled reading this the first time. Is there any way I could persuade you to write a second chapter? I'll make you cookies! :D

Oh, that was evil of you, stopping here! Still, it's beautifully written and I love it :)

sorry for what?

damn! that was so...so...*choke*...

i'm begging, continue!

seriously, i'm drooling, my hormones are off the chart right now!

Holy crap, continue this!

Wow! That was amazing! I am wondering what it is you are sorry for (in your AN at the end). That was short and, well I was going to say sweet but I guess HOT would be a better word. There was a lot of good imagery there.

I hope they will be together in the end, they really deserve to be and I can't imagine that they don't love each other beyond words.

Cheers for Royai!

My god...shameless doesn't even begin to cover it. I thought you told me you never published stuff liket his, because it was too embarrassing? Guess not...Really well written, and tasteful, given the subject matter, but that doesn't help me from cringing when I think that I read this at school...Oy.

The Pterodactyl

YAY!

Wow. Terrible cutoff point! Lovley writing though, definatly going on my story alert list!

-grins- It seems like his 'food' is what's playing w/ HIM. Not the other way around. -still grining- You know people are gonna complain. I'm in too good of a mood to do so right now though. I am not happy about the fact that it cut off right there though. -musing for like a second- It does leave it open for a sequel though doesn't it. -grins again- This is great. I love it. _