 Calwen 8/27/03 . chapter 1That was such a goodly written story,you have to write more stories on the Gundam series cause you sure have soem talent.*hugs and kisses* |
 Sekaina 2/16/03 . chapter 1That's a great fic! I really like how you portrayed the people in the helicopter and at the Jamaica base! Good work! |
 Jess7 11/28/02 . chapter 1That was really well written, you seem to be very involved with all your fanfic's.
The only thing that bugged me was... "Anyone who sees me has got a date with his maker." ::Shudder:: From the dub. That is SO not in th original version.
Umm, apart from that it was great! I got the Zwanzing thing to (studied German for a time) nice to see people as obsessed with the numbers as the creators were O-o;; - |
 Natsumi the Wolf 7/27/02 . chapter 1Quite well-written. The greatest! I'll give it an A on ur writing and idea. It's cool. Keep it up. |
 anon 7/8/01 . chapter 1 |
 ChocoCream2 2/26/01 . chapter 1O.O I love Duo fics! LOL. Just one mistake I saw, the height of Gundam Deathscythe. It's 7 metres tall (I'm American too and I use the metric system 'cos I live in Canada!) so there's no way it could be over six stories tall... wait... unless people in AC195 became so short stories shrunk or else the metric system grew! That would explain why our favorite pilots of all time are so... "short". heehee. Don't ask, I babble on and on a lot... see? Lotsa Love, Jeanette (ps Duo's my faaaaavorite pilot : ) Thanks for writinga bout him!) |
 Felicity 2/26/01 . chapter 1 Very interesting so far. I like it. Post some more. |
 Stormy 2/25/01 . chapter 1 Whoo-hoo - Duo is kickass in this ficcie! Great job! |
 Kimbo aka Diona 2/19/01 . chapter 1Cool. You should do something more with this fic... Oh well, you don't have to listen to me. Good job. |
 Lyra of Destiny 9/16/00 . chapter 1One word: COOL! (Wait a sec, is this a novelization or not? If it is, I don't think I've seen this episode. If it's not, then more power to ya.) Lyra Maxwell of Destiny |
 DuoShinagami 8/28/00 . chapter 1I really enjoyed your story. :) You are right that a lot of fics are about Duo (mine included) but we got to see all about Heero landing, it's time Duo's got equal time, darn it! :) Kinda funny, I lived in Tucson, AZ for a whole year and never went to the Grand Canyon. Even drove thru Flagstaff a couple of times, went right by it. Now I will have to go and see if you really can hide a Gundam in it! :) Nice job. :) |
 Noin113 8/13/00 . chapter 1This was nice!I liked how you threw in military savvy and still had an entertaining story.Keep it up! |
 Sailor Earth 7/15/00 . chapter 1 Wow. That was amazing! You have got a great writing stlye and I can't wait to read your other fics. (By the way, *Dorothy* is your favotrite! That's different!) |
 The Jackal 7/14/00 . chapter 1 I like this story. True, I think some more fics need to be written about people like Dorothy, Hilde, Wufei, etc. those guys just don't win the popularity contest. Cool geography fact at the end! Keep writing! |
 Elf 7/3/00 . chapter 1Excellent story. I love that song by the BOC and mentioned it in a fanfic with Duo in it. I always wondered what his arival on Earth was like, and thank you for that info. It was perfict. |