amazing

very unique

btw check my story out x

r u writin more?

xx..Emz..xx

Well that was very good I have a question I know what it says in the book but what if she was changed well she was pregnet I mean like you say the lines between them are blured why couldn't this happen?Update ASAP!

it's good.

lol, jk! i really do like it, i never thought of bella getting pregnant so it was really creative. i really think it's good. ^^

Ooh! I bet that they go through the window of the Volvo, and go in a sea slash ocean slash thingy.

Running from bloodsucking undead just became a heap more complicated. Bella continues to know what she wants: to succeed without having to sacrifice anyone. She just wishes that Edward would tell her more. He obviously has a plan or is working on one; he must have his reasons for not telling her everything right now. Perhaps he senses that she's not ready for what is to come, not ready yet, but knows that she'll rise to the occasion when the time is right, he at her side. Still, he tells her that her safety is paramount. She wants a promise for their future happiness and what he offers is clear and without quarter. His love is absolute.

There was a moments pause, -- moment's

(Care to take any guesses?) They've dived into the lobster tank at the local Lobster & Waffle Hut and Alice is ready to take their order. (Will you ever let me have another little peek after this? ;-)

CraftyNotepad

oh the suspense!

plz updatee!

o man its getting good! lol. keep writing! i want to see wat happens next.
loudie

Such well written suspension! I'm literally gagging for another chapter! What makes your writing so great is the amount of detail you put into everything, and you convey emotions very strongly. Please be nice to our favourite couple!

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Hi! I think this is really great! Update soon!

ok there I'm with Bella they better all make it through this alive and well Edward Bella the Baby and there family I will forgive you in the end for any cliffy's you may throw at me if that happen's also it would really great if Bella was a Vampire by the end oh I have an idea Alice could have a vision that it would be ok for Bella to be changed wheil she was still preagnet and the baby would be ok then she would be a Vampire he would stop chaseing her everyone would be ok and alive and happy of corse he would still have to die.just a thought.Update ASAP!

omg! I just love this fanfic! PLEASE up date soon! agh!

Keep it coming, please!

i love it!