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| my bleeding tears of agony 2008-08-21 ch 2,  | abuseaaw |
| SassyAni 2008-05-13 ch 2, | abuseHot. Really, really, hot. I have no words, other than hot. Wow. Please continue! |
| Vampiremizuki 2008-04-02 ch 2, | abuseWow, very detailed. Your fanfic is amazing :] - Mizuki |
| Enthralled 2008-03-31 ch 2, | abuseNice lemon... |
| CrimsonScarz 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abusethat was a really good chapter. it was sweet and hott at the same time. perfect for them. and u like answered all the "waht if" questions. really good. i hope this isn't the end. i can't wait to see her parents reactions. i mean they didn't even know they were engaged yet. and then the cullens. well it's not as excited, but still u want to know what's ganna happen! haha. :D |
| CrimsonScarz 2008-03-22 ch 1, | abusei havn't reviewed all day and i decided i actualyl had something to say to this chapter. haha. i like this idea. i havn't seen it yet, and thats a rare occurance in the twilight section. and i really like that u had the whole masen cullen thing in there. it just occured to me that really it's his last name is masen, but everyone just assumes she would be a cullen. which makes sence but at the same time makes u wonder. its cool u put that in there. |
| Edward911 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseTHAT IS A TURN ON! I WONDER WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO BELLA! UPDATE ASAP! :D |
| Jennipher 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuse>/< Only Bella and Edward can have a talk about that stuff while in the middle of...about to have sex. Only them. My god. that was a good lemon. Update soon! |
| stinkybunny 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abusevery good...but how about updating more often than every 3 and a half months?!? ;) |
| My-BellaLuvsEdward 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseOMG! That is so sweet! I love this story please continue writing |
| kirstiemuggins 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseAw. He's cute. Why did his eyes turn green though? |
| jjrenee85 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseOh. That was pretty hot. Jessica |
| latuacantante4him 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abuseOHMTGOSH! I loved it. Of course, I now need a cold shower. LOL |
| Jennipher 2008-03-21 ch 1, | abuseI think that you should continue. Please? I like this. |
| London Rose 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abusemore please. |