ah, dealing with lotsa issues there... mostly inuyasha's --> never knew he was so deep, jokes... XP Glad you got it posted!

I'm in a happy mood. therefore, no real critiques forthcoming... oh wait... here we go! umm.. with dialogue, make it more... natural. I don't think Kagome would be that stiff and formal, so relax her a little bit. The rest is great, and your antagonist buddy is developing wings! mwahaha!

at the end... u spelled RIDICULOUS wrong. jus pointing that out 2. oh and i kinda like the story so far...

yeah umm. u've been spelling the wrong "coarse" like if im saying, "of COURSE" ok. so yea jus puttin that out there 4 ya

i think lina is in cahoots with the shou guy! i guess ill have to wait and see

Whoa. The story sure is moving quickly! I would suggest you try to pace yourself, but it's also good how it is.

Nice job! Complications, complications...

KYAH! we're going somewhere!! How'll they get out of this one.. I'll wait and see! keep writing!

ohh, and keep a hold of your grammar+punctuation. I know I'm not one to talk, but yeah.

Will Kagome ever embrace Aiko and face the fear she has? and whats up with Lina? is she workin for the dude inuyasha and kagome are tryin to find? i hope you write more.

When I saw the title of this chapter, I wondered whther you even KNEW that Shou is the name of the vocalist of a certain JRock... fixation... of mine. He's pretty funny. Anyway.
COOL! You've got your villain. I assume he's OC. And oh we're GOING somewhere!! I wonder what happens when Lina gets her arrows into some of those dead guys ^.^
and yeah. T_T Poor aiko... I'm gonna wait and see how you solve that one.

Oh very interesting. And the plot thickens! I have no idea where you're going with this, and I can't wait to find out!

I love it! It is so good! I love it i love it i love it! Keep up the amazing work! Well, TTYL ~ Inulover227

Oh...how sad! What an awful thing for the magician to do! I just hope Kagome succeeds.

Wow. Magical, Elfin!
you really do have problems with internet.
But the story is superb! You handled the situation so well! THe first part nearly made me cry... I can't believe she was actually hanged!! It's hard to accept that this is the realm of the dead... And yes! RE-DEMP-TION! WOT you kill this realm, girl! Obliterate it and everytihng it stands for... with kagome, of course. *ehem* got a bit carried away.. again.. with the storyline.. i forget that it's KAGOME who shall solve this, not you..
go you anyway. KIL IT!

i like your fic.ive onlt read to chappie 4 but i only guess that the next chappies will be half as good.i cant wait to continue it.

LINA! How dare she! Yeah, yeah, I know - there's no proof it was Lina. Still, I've actually been wondering about her for a long while now. How awful...

yay!! ~clappity clappity~ SOMETHING'S ABOUT TO HAPPEN!!
no why did lina let Aiko stay? if she knew she was evil, then wouldn't she have pulled the big priestess act and eradicated Aiko?? NOO THEY'RE ALL GOING TO DIE!
~sorry, getting ahead of myself here