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| Johnny-on-the-spot 2008-07-08 ch 1, | abuseYou made me cry! This is that good... :D |
| Pheonix Eternia 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWonderful! It's nice to see a continuation ficlet of the movie that doesn't try to beat it out on an epic level. Sam is entirely in character. You've even included some of the pee-references the movie liked so much. |
| Cyndi 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abuseI'm speechless...this was beautiful. :) |
| mdnytryder 2008-02-27 ch 1, | abuseWhat a terrific story. There were so many emotions involved, from alarm (I can't think of a scarier sound than a shotgun cocking) to friendship (great use of the universal greeting) to sadness (loss of a friend) to yearning (everyone wants to be remembered when they die). One of the best stories I've read. |
| Missed Nin 2008-02-08 ch 1, | abuseThis is a great story! It's an interesting read, and there's a whole lot of character development and themes and depth there that come across really well. Thanks for writing something so good :D Reading it made my day better! ~MN |
| come-by-chance 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseThis was awesome, is it finished? |
| lilyoftheval5 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseVery touching. And very impressive. |
| ArmoredSoul 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseYAY!! Arcee! I like Arcee... Even though she wasn't in the movie. And all I know of her comes from fanfictions and Wikipedia. *shrug* Oh well. I still like her. |
| the-real-mo 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuse... wow. I really, really liked this. There's just an incredibly good feeling throughout this whole story -- I don't think I can quite put my finger on it. It was a lot more psychological than anything else I've read lately, and it had an almost laid-back narration to it that made it very enjoyable to read. Very believable, and just... this fanfic makes you think. Thanks for it! |
| Bunnylass 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseOk so this is one of my first Transformers stories, and i LOVED it! This was awesome. I was gutted when Jazz died, so it was nice to read about him in this. Great job : ) |
| SkyHighFan 2007-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was nice but Sam WAS a hero: he saved the world when he killed Megatron. He ended a war that had gone on for thousands of years. Yes Mikeala and Bumblebee fought together but I think Mikaela returned because she couldn't stand being on the sidelines while the guy she loved risked his life for the world. Mikaela and Bumblebee's 11th hour cavalry charge was one of my favorite parts of the movie. Mikaela never fought alongside Jazz though. In the movie all but Jazz seemed to end up having a battle-partner: Lennox had Epps, Ratchet had Ironhide, Mikaela had Bumblebee and ultimatly Optimus had Sam. I liked how you had Optimus team up with Sam though: most stories have either Sam and Bumblebee and Mikaela and Bumblebee or Lennox and Ironhide pairings on missions but this is the first I read that paired up Optimus and Sam. Another story I liked paired everyone off together with an Autobot: Sam with Bumblebee, Mikaela with Ratchet, Ironhide with Lennox, Jazz with Maggie (who revived him from the dead with some help from Mikaela), Powerglide with a guy named David, Optimus with David's sister Victoria (who as it turned out were Keller's kids) and Chromia with a cop named Tess. That story ended with all of the Decepticons on Earth (except Scorponok: he was never mentioned) being killed after a huge battle that ended when Victoria managed to tap into Soundwave's mental power and hold Starscream in place long enough for David, Powerglide and a flight of F-22's to launch a strike that killed all of the Decepticons and ended the battle. |
| morph 2007-12-03 ch 1, | abuseReally beautiful little story. Fantastic work. XD |
| Ziggyboo 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was a wonderful, touching story--I absolutely loved it. :) Thank you so much for posting it. |
| Psychic-Ghost 2007-11-25 ch 1, | abuseAww. I love it. |
| CreedsGalBirdy 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abusePerfection. |