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| Haloclimb 2008-07-02 ch 1,  | abuseI simply [i]adore[/i] this story! I love how it's written, and how it shows Skorponok's thoughts as -he- would probably feel them. I actually loved the broken up kind of writing-it makes it feel more like we're looking right into his head! I would seriously love to see more of this, it's just too good to have as a one-shot! |
| Ie-maru 2008-06-14 ch 1, | abuse-sniff- This is a great story, really -smiles- |
| dark crimson dragon mistres... 2008-05-29 ch 1, | abuseHi. I think this is an awsome story and i agree with armoredsoul. Please Please PLEASE make a sequal to this story. I think it would be really cool if the Autobots found out that Scorpy was alive and that he was actually a mom.^~^ I actually wish i could see their faces. i garuantee it would be hillarious. |
| Ally Inu 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThis is so amazing. I didn't expect to see a story like this. Good work :] |
| ArmoredSoul 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseGuardian Scorpinok. I like that. It proves that not all Decepticons are beyond hope, that those who once killed can help others survive. *hugs* - You should SO totally make this into a serial. Like, the Autobots discover that Scorpinok is still alive, and are afraid that he'll do something (negative, of course), only to discover that the drone has been taking care of these human children. What do you think the Autobots would think of that, eh? ^-^ Hope I gave you some inspiration!! |
| HitokiriKurisuta 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThat was really sweet, and beautifully written, and I absolutely loved it. You did a marvelous job of capturing everything about what Scorponok was going through and thinking and feeling. Amazing. |
| Kd Zeal 2008-03-05 ch 1, | abuseThose would grow to be some messed up children. You actually handled the madness very well, and I didn't find it hard to follow. |
| Ace of Dreams 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseI love the confused thoughts and contrasting impulses and how the violent monster turns into the motherly caregiver. It's so cute. |
| LittleMewLugia 2008-01-23 ch 1, | abusewow...that was kinda sweet. poor scorponok. ~LML~ |
| Tiemar 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusePoor Scorp. Conflicting thoughts toward the humans; to kill or to save them? I love how you managed to pull this off. |
| Fae Child19 2007-12-30 ch 1, | abuseI liked that. Scorponok's thoughts were very interesting, especially how he changed his programming to help his new family. |
| Hello 2007-12-18 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice! I like this 'what happens to Scorponok' scenario. Interesting character development, and a nice touch of realism (one of the humans already being dead, etc). I'll join in with the call for a sequel - I'd love to read it! |
| Novamyth 2007-11-28 ch 1, | abuseOh I loved this! XD Written really well and leaves openings for a possible sequel. I hope you do one! |
| lightningmouse 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuseI enjoyed reading this a great deal, though it requires slow, careful reading. (I tend to read fast >.>). I'd really like to read a sequel to this one, if you believe one would be doable. =) |
| AyameKitsune 2007-11-21 ch 1, | abuse*Grins* I love this fic. Is there gonna be more like it? |