Touching.

I remember reading this story couple months back. But re-reading was as if I was taking a different journey that the first. As if i had never read it in the first place.

I just wanted to say that this story was so enjoyable to read and was filled with so many emotions. Made me laugh, had a big smile on my face, and at the very end had me crying from the sadness and how beautiful this was.

Absolutely adored this story!

This made me cry. This story is one of the most beautiful ones I have ever read, and tears from me are rare. I loved every part if this story and have nothing but good things to say about it. Thank you.

I hope that you come and read this post. I really do. This was one of the most enjoyable emotion driven stories i have read in a long time. You did not over explain things making it dry and you did not under explain things. This story was a heart warming and driven story from the first chapter to the last. The emotions you were able to convey from your characters had me laughing with a big smile on my face when they were happy and joking and angry and pissed when they were betrayed. The emotions they conveyed during the sad times were also very powerful and adding those songs that you had him play were profound. I would bring up youtube and have the song play at the parts i was at, and i highly appriciated that you named the song and author so that i could find the songs. The ending songs for Hikare i thought were the best i have ever heard while reading the heart renching lines of the characters in between. I have not read such a good book like in this in a while and makes me wish for another just like it. If there is anything to say i think you had one of the best story idea's i have read. If anything keep up your spirit and i saw the notes you left in the beggining chapters of those that would say that it sucked or they did not like the story, well i say to hell with them, they just don't understand a great story if it came up and bit them in the rear. I hope to find another great story from you sometime in the future as you have just been added as a favorite aurther if anything just to be able to read this story again. Don't lose the passion of the written word and keep enjoying letting your imagination flow. Have a good one.

I don't really get why no one has Naruto stop Sasuke or Orochimaru or Kabuto from putting the kunai in the people's heads. That's how they control the dead, right?

*wipes tears from reading the Epilogue*

I know this is an old story and all, but this story has to be the best overall story, I have read in quite sometime everything about it was great

Love the story very last chapter made me cry very well written five hundred stars out of five

I really loved this story and I am sad that it had to end. Really, a brilliant story :)

i was crying most of this chapter so much emotion

WOW!

Plain Dumb...I mean how can someone be as dumb as Naruto here...Sasuke told him that he will have his revenge and through his kids, that too not once but twice and he dint kill Sasuke then and there, hoping that he will have a change of heart...SERIOUSLY!

i truly enjoyed this story thank you for making it. oh and i was not downing any of your chapters, i just wanted to help you improve your writing as others have helped me over the years.

Alright to date i'm loving this story, but seriously man the whole demon this demon that thing is getting reallly annoying. We all get that naruto aand ino are demons we don't need to be reminded every 2 paragraphs. It disturbs the story and is a bit of a turn off if you catch my drift. i like naruto but where i come from demons are evil and it only causes me to think less of naruto because of that. as an autohor you need to be aware of your readers and there desires the whole fox thing awesome the whole demon thing, not so much. Instead of saying something about how he's a demon say somethin about him being a king of the vulpine. the way you right the story also shows that you have a bit of a demon fetish man and it's gets creepy to the readers after a while. otherwise a very good story can't wait to finish.

I'm not gonna lie I'm a little upset as to the fact that naruto is now like a half fox, but I really enjoy where this story is going keep it as it is wothout all the hopelessness that most romance writers put into their works and you will probably have yourselff a very unique flavor to your writing. Also could you stop bashing kakashi he's been on naruto's side from the beginning just like naruto has been on sasuke's side.

I'm not gonna lie I'm a little upset as to the fact that naruto is now like a half fox, but I really enjoy where this story is going keep it as it is wothout all the hopelessness that most romance writers put into their works and you will probably have yourselff a very unique flavor to your writing