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| CJNyfalt 2008-05-11 ch 21,  | abuseI like this story. You have managed to create a fresh new take on an old concept, and additionally make the characters sound in character. No out of character emo-Ranma here. |
| Howard Russell 2008-05-11 ch 21, | abuseAnd the cast continues to grow! What will Kasumi think? And what will she tell Akane and the rest of her family? Then how long until Genma finds out and comes to cause trouble? Then how long will he survive against a dead-scream-wielding Pluto? Thanks for letting us see Mr. Tenoh like that. The more insight into your original characters, the better. |
| Innortal 2008-05-10 ch 21, | abuseExcellent work once more. |
| Rose1948 2008-05-10 ch 21, | abuseAnother excellent and enjoyable chapter, hon. ::hug:: Take care! |
| Taiki 2008-05-10 ch 21, | abuseExcellent as always. Please have more out ASAP! Later. |
| cybermage 2008-05-09 ch 21, anon. | abusePoor Hotaru. I wonder if she will be attracted to male ranma. He's the type of honourable guy that would protect her and he is unbiased. Maybe he can become her 'nii-san'. hope you update soon. |
| Lerris 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseAnother good addition.. |
| Firehedgehog 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuse*claps hands happily* great update |
| mythicalprogrammer 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseSo good. The story is progressing really well. I wonder how old is Hotaru? Rnama is around 17? |
| isoulmani 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseAnd they epic meeting of two punching bags has come to pass. Nothing spectular but it gets the job done. If anyone can help Hotaru deal with being special I'm preaty sure it's the gender bending senshi with multiple Fiancées who killed a god. Getting beaten up and healing people musteriously sort of pales in comparsion. |
| deathgeonous 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseWell, yeah that's pretty much how Hotaru was treated back then. Hope you can change that some what. Well good chapter, fast update and great story. Thanks for writing this, bye for now. |
| Dragon Man 180 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseWell, the reason I like Hotaru so much is because she had to endure much of the same treatment I did in Elementary school, so I sympathize with her. Hopefully Ranma and Haruka can keep an eye out for her. I can also see Ranma decking Haruka if she mentions killing Saturn later. In fact, that would be a great way to add some tension to the relationship if you wanted. Dr. Tofu is scary when he's around lots of people. At least little kids are beneath his radar, since none of them seemed to get hurt by him. |
| AshK 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseHey don't worry about it! It's still a great chapter! Keep up the great work. Sincerely, AshK |
| FluffyNevyn 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseYay, isnt the end, gots to be careful with that word you know. Good chapter, Query: Are you going to resolve Kasumi x Tofu? It would be nice to see, it always is. |
| deitarion/SSokolow 2008-05-09 ch 21, | abuseAs usual, I like it. :) One correction though. As I remember, Suichi --> Souichi |