 Orchamus 2009-10-31 . chapter 48Words cannot express my satisfaction with this story, just know that I'm clapping for you. |
 elrail 2009-10-20 . chapter 48great story. when i first looked at it i thought that it was going to be a weird match up, but you made it work.
so keep up the good work. |
 AnFan-n-More 2009-10-01 . chapter 42I have to say, I've been thinking, and I wondered what impact the senshi would have on the Stargate universe? Could be interesting, especially with the Outers being responsible for outside attacks :)
Looking forward to how you will handle this. I'm very impressed with your writing style and the strength and tightness of your plot and character development. |
 AnFan-n-More 2009-10-01 . chapter 41I have to say, that I am very sorry that I'm nearing chapter 48. I have been reading this fic with great joy. I really hope you are still writing it so that I can see more in the future. If however ch48 is the completion and I just haven't reached it yet "Nevermind!" :D |
 BlackRoseFire 2009-09-28 . chapter 48Awesome story I really oved it. I can't wait to read the next chapter/sequal. |
 god of stuff 2009-09-16 . chapter 48I am loving the story so far. It is about damned time their relationship progressed a little. Hopefully Haruka can get him past his shyness.
As for splitting the books apart, I don't really see the use of it. You could just add "book #" at the start of each chapter or something. One thing that really annoys me is when I start reading a story marked as complete just to find that it is continued in another incomplete book. |
 Poetheather1 2009-09-03 . chapter 48I am really impressed. I was going to see how you got them together and then stop reading, but then the story grabbed me and I have read the whole thing pretty well straight through. Excellent job. |
 Vixen2 2009-08-30 . chapter 48Well I kind of lost this in the fanfiction sorting system. That said this is getting more and more interesting I wonder how the scouts are going to interact now that the issue of the crystals is out of the way (with the whole self-sacrificing aspect of Ranma's comments) and they know about Hotaru being possesed. Shame they didn't manage to force Mistress 9 out into the open but at least Pluto doesn't know Hotaru's Saturn yet.
As for your question I'd say leave this alone and simply make a mention of it when posting book 3 (assusming you haven't already started that, I intend to check your author page after this review is posted) anyway looking forward to seeing what comes next. |
 ShineX 2009-08-22 . chapter 26Honestly, I would of killed the bastard. He not only wants to kill Ranma, he held one of his loved ones hostage and said plainly that he would do so again as soon as he was able. If he was only threatening him then I could understand just making it so he can't move, but he was also threatening all he loved. Most of whom can't even hold a good stance. That being the case, he could really kill someone he loved and the only way to stop that permanently would be killing him. By letting him live like that he just made it so he'll likely look back at this and regret not doing what was needed. |
 ShineX 2009-08-22 . chapter 48You've done well, though I admit that Ranma would probably be frantic to find Hotaru instead of focused on other things. I mean, I might want to find the demon that can wipe me out with ease while it's weakened, wouldn't you? Overall, this whole fic has done very well, good job. Update soon! |
 ShineX 2009-08-22 . chapter 47Not bad |
 ShineX 2009-08-22 . chapter 46Yeah, admittedly, I can see him losing if he doesn't use chi moves considering he needs to hit him so many damn times to even dent him. Nice job |
 ShineX 2009-08-22 . chapter 45Sweet, is this one of the fics where she actually gets the help she needs before it's too late? |
 ShineX 2009-08-21 . chapter 44To point something out, there's one other thing the inner senshi should consider. What's the point of saving the people with the proper crystals if they're going to die anyway? |
 ShineX 2009-08-21 . chapter 43talk about sucky luck |