| Reviews for Smoochie! |
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Origins877 6/15/05 . chapter 1OMG HAT! That was funny! But I can't imagine Muza restraining Kyleen without freezing up...or even getting close to any female...unless they were ugly or something. |
samantha 5/20/02 . chapter 5 i think the story was really good i liked it you should write the next chapter and keep going from there |
MooCow 4/30/02 . chapter 5 Im gonna do a reveiw of all the chapters... -Ironing the kimono? Does that mean that Soushis...? *eyes get all starry and little hearts surround her head* Meep...*_* *people throw things at her* -'Soushi... Innocent...?' XD! Ahahahaha! Thats gotta be one of the funniest lines! And Kanouhas here! Yay! All hail the perverted old Katana Master! Whooo! Oh,yeah..poor Muza! _ -*wipes a tear of happiness from her eye* The old lady! Muza freezing! Kanouha trying to sneak away! PRICELESS! Masochistic Meis! XD! -Now the other girls are in on it! _ *blinks* But Soushi IS frail! *people look at her funny* x_X;; What?...Awww..look-y! Soushis being POMPOUS! Aint he cute?...MORE MASOCHISTIC MEIS! YAAAY! -Smoochie! Whooo! And...*is feeling just as confused as Meis and Sodina* Shmidt? ALIVE? *tackles Shimdt*Mineminemine! _ Jealas alive too? o_0; Meep..How exactly did this come about?...Uh-oh...whats up with Soushi...? YAY! All-in-all,this is a WONDERFUL story! I cant wait to see what happens next! *goes to stand in the HUGE line of girls wanting smootchies from Soushi* Kiss me,samurai! XD! |
Lephise 2/5/02 . chapter 4*falls over* How can you just not continue after that chapter? Although I'm not really one to talk ;;. Please put more up _ BTW, great characterizations of the characters (except you may wish to tone down on Soushi-just a bit _). Keep it up! |
Lady Sodina 10/28/01 . chapter 1 MORE! |
Jeffrey 9/20/01 . chapter 1 Wow a kissing booth. Very good. Who's going to kiss who?. Keep it up. |
Riyuji 9/13/01 . chapter 1 Keep 'em coming! I need to know what happens very badly! _... Love your ST fanfics too! |
person17 9/8/01 . chapter 1! finally somthin with soushi in it! that's true to his nature NE wayz... write more. |
Lephise 9/1/01 . chapter 1*giggles* Very good. You've made it so I want to read the next one a.s.a.p. _ Write the sequel soon! |