Every time Cinnamon talks about she has a large cinnamon stick I laugh. Nothing dirty. It is just I can see a girl running around whacking people with a giant cinnamon stick and it is too funny.

Nice work on this update as always!

That was just so cute! I like the idea of the senshi being named after candy.

Interesting first chapter.

cute

Nice update with this chapter! Keep up the great work!

Sincerley,
AshK

Not cool but maybe she is not really dead.

Why did you have to kill off little Hotaru? Is there a point to killing Hotaru off? I am just wondering. Anyway great update! Keep them coming!

Sincerely,
AshK

This seems like it will be a good story. Please update.

Interesting. Though I think Neo-Queen Serenity is acting a bit out of character. Interested to see where this story goes.

Im a sailor moon Fan and I couldn't get into it at all so im sending you this review as BORING.

good start! It looks like it's going to be an excellent story!

Sincerely,
AshK