I really really really like this. I wish I could be more articulate about it. The Maximoff twins' relationship fascinates me in whatever form it takes. I like the way you portrayed the family dynamic between them and Magneto. And even that you didn't describe their relationship as about romance but just this need and overwhelming love that never had any other outlets. So I like this.

I love this fic! I found this while searching for Scarlet Witch. I'm glad I stumbled upon it. Great job.

that's wonderful!

i love the way you write.

thank you

Good and artful handling of a tricky subject. Well done.

That was very lovely. I adored the colours and textures in this, and Wanda's feminine and mature voice. Poor Pietro.

Loved it. Very well written. We need more Pietro/Wanda stuff. can u write another one, or a sequal or something?

I think this is wonderful. There's not nearly enough stuff about Pietro not to mention Wanda... I don't think it's strange at all. They ARE twins. Twins are connected and share things... given the circumstances, I can quite see it happening. _ I adore this story. Glad someone talked about the WandaXPietro relationship.

Very interesting. The best part about it is that it's quite unique: there are elements that I have noticed in other places (mostly the relationships between the characters, which are handled quite nicely here, even if incest is still creepy _) but on the whole, this is a very original piece. Also, the writing itself is well-done and quite expertly crafted. You have a very distinct voice, one that I would like to see more of.

Dude, he's her BROTHER.

It is beautifully written. Evocative and compelling. A little freaky in the bro/sis thing, but I can see where the idea formed for their, um, unconventional relationship. You have a very poetic soul, and I hope that you write more, if not in this vein, then in others, because I'd love to see more from your talented hand. Well done!

They're Brother and Sister! Yer ol' pal, The Bud.