 Angel's Angel 2009-03-13 . chapter 2Question: Is Vanessa in trouble now?
Since Light aka Kira knows Vanessa's name now... perhaps Light knows that she was the one L almost called... and maybe he suspects Vanessa of having too many info since L seemed close to her (in act she doesn't know who Kira is... only suspects Light anyway... I think)
I wanna read a sequel! |
 gaara'sonmymind 2007-12-20 . chapter 2Oh whoa, i am very interested now. Hehe, Light and his evilness...God do i dislike him sometimes. -sigh- Anyway, i am sorta upset (as any fan of L would be) that L had to die...again...but the story must go on! I can't wait for your next update, for well...you sorta left a cliffhanger! XD Update soon!
P.S. If you reply to my reviews...i might take a while to reply back. Been real busy again. ~_~ |
 gaara'sonmymind 2007-12-20 . chapter 1This is actually the first Death Note fanfiction i have read, but i guess it is good compared to other OCs i have read! And well, you know i always like your stories!! Anyway, i am saying that this chapter was cute, and i will read and review the next chapter in a minute! |
 Aly the Trickster 2007-11-29 . chapter 2You'd think L would be smarter than to put a name to Vanessa's number in his phonebook...anyways! Nice chapter, I liked the way that L almost called Vanessa but didn't...you're giving him a lot more character than the anime did.
And I...um...I need an extension on my deadline...I'll send it in by Sunday I think. Lots of homework...
Nice chapter
~Ari |
 AnimeOtakuBara 2007-11-18 . chapter 1Soo cute |
 OsricPearl 2007-11-17 . chapter 1poor Vanessa!
Although I thought that L was a little OOC, it's a cute story. |
 Aly the Trickster 2007-11-10 . chapter 1Aww, that was really sweet. See, that was a fluff story! And a really good one, too!
I can't remember, was Vanessa a character(a side one, I know she wasn't a main character) in the series? When was she mentioned? Anyways, nice story, I like it a lot!
Do you need me to resend my chapter?
~Ari |
 kisa sohma cookie 2007-11-09 . chapter 1Kawaii! Instant fav! Please write a sequel! I'm deperate to know what happens to Vanessa now...Aggh! The suspense! |