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Reviews for: Your Lips Are Mine
shadewatcher
2009-01-03 . chapter 1
omg that is too cute. soo funny, lol that is soo what little kids do too. lol very sweet.
Robina
2008-06-16 . chapter 1
Way to go Raph, get your fiance kissed by everyone why don't you! Geez, that turtle...

Very cute!
The Light of Reason
2008-06-03 . chapter 1
Aw, that is so cute!
And yes, no seven year old should have the ability to talk like that and mke butterflies flutter in my chest like that, when I'm more than twice his age!
Anyway, loved it, Donnie was so cute, I absolutely adore him!
Yes Mikey, he is much better because of the superpowered lips. Of course don't forget Leo, doing his duty. Heehee!
More stories!
JohnnyMakesNuts
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Ah, so cute! I think my favorite stories are these with the kid-turtles. Donnie is my favorite, but Mikey was really cute in this one too XD I love little jealous Raph! Ah, what more can I say, besides favoriting!
The ORIGINAL Corky
2008-03-09 . chapter 1
More squeeness! This is like one of my old favorite TV shows, "Muppet Babies" lol. Little kid turtles are just so tute!! *huggles them all up*

I did have to look up what bokkens were though. lol. But now that I know, it makes it all the better! lol.

Off to the next!
Arroba Dotcom
2007-12-07 . chapter 1
Yeah, Kid-Turtles sure are cute! X3
Oh, Raph, being all jealous over Donny, are you? XD Aww... Raph can be such a cutie... It was funny when Mikey and Leo kissed Donny because they thought he was sick and their kisses would make him feel better. LOL Donny didn't seem to mind but Raph was so fun to read, being all angry, seeing others kiss his Donny. XP LOL
Lovely fic. ^^
I love the way you picture Raph and Donny as kids. ^^ They couldn't look cuter. -^^- I'm already a fan of your Raph/Don fics!!
aisarete
2007-11-12 . chapter 1
*squeaks* They're... so... adorable!

“I’ll kiss you too! If Raphie-kisses make you feel good, then Mikey-kisses will make you feel way better!”

Aw! I loved reading this.

I hope you go through with the continuation fic; I'd love to see them ten years later! And your a fellow nanowrimo writer? Neat.

Well, good luck with your novel. GOODLUCKGOODLUCKGOODLUCK! And if you ever wanna talk about stuff, or need some encouragement, send me a message! ^^

~Ai
estel_anim
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
Woo! I love your stories, they are just so sweet, can’t wait for more!
Hoodoo
2007-11-09 . chapter 1
So sweet. I'm liking that Mikey stole Leo's bokken too, and I really like the line,

"“I’ll even kiss you like the movie stars on t.v. kiss.” He whispered, making a promise in a sultry voice that no seven year old should be capable of."

Hot! :)
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