sweet

Please make a sequel I want to konw what happens next. That was to cute.

Oh wow. Such a cool story. I've never read one of the OOC types before and this was great. Thank you so much for sharing.

I had so much fun reading that! Innocent boys trying to figure out their feelings... makes me wonder what they would do when grow up :D

I liked it very much!
How cute.
I kinda wish they had spent their youth together like this.
They wouldn't be this twisted.. T^T
The bottomeline is, I really liked this piece, and I would love to see another story from you!!

*squeals* SO ADORABLE! You should write MORE! This is so perfect, it's light, it's funny, and yet it's sweet. It gives me cavities, in fact. X3 I adore the incorporation of canon elements in there, and you did it very smoothly indeed. *thumbs-up* From Koumyou to Gojyo's stepmom to Kouryuu needing reading glasses. *nods emphatically* They are quite in-character too, I don't know why you're so nervous, babe. ;)
MARVELLOUS first job, please continue to write more. ^_- There were a couple oopsies in there that a beta could've caught, but they were not enough to distract me from the well-crafted story. In fact, I want a continuation. Hehehe XD