I love their cute interactions. You make it so believable! I can imagine this going on in the manga!

It's totally because he looks SO freaking much like his father, that's why.

Ayame is so cute, I love how you've writen her character, the best yet!

Cute! All I can say.

Her ducking under the counter was adorable! I love this series.

acting silly looks good on young lovers... well thought and good written my oppinion. thanks.

Again, a fantastic story, i loveyour ideas of his reasons.

Oh my, that's sweet. I can hear the other me is being plunged in a fandom called Kakashi x Ayame. Hmm..

Hehe. That line about his teeth being gross is still my fave.