 Wierdo-Lover 2009-08-05 . chapter 1-giggles-
I so know why Kakashi took the book b4 Teuchi turned the page...lol
There is more to the recipe than just raisins!
You make Kakashi and Ayame the cutest couple ever!
Great job! |
 G.Mallory 2009-01-24 . chapter 1"Jusy so. This book is chock full of chastity." That line cracked me up. I love this series. KakashixAyame is one of my favorite crack pairings but there's not too much of it out there. *sigh* I suppose I'll have to write one... |
 RakeeshJ4 2008-01-14 . chapter 1HA! "This book is just chock full of chastity."
I haven't laughed out loud at a line in a Naruto fanfic so hard since I read sna's 'Girl Talk', which if you have not read I heartily recommend.
Here I am again, in the same boat I was with a previous story of yours I reviewed. I have very little critical to say, making this review just a bit pointless I sometimes wonder.
But! I do have one thing to suggest: I realize it fits the theme you're going for, but while this Kakashi *does* certainly seem to match the whimsical, mischievious Kakashi we see from time to time, there is not even a whiff of the somber, regret-filled veteran who lives entirely by himself, all of whose old friends are dead.
But having THAT Kakashi peek into this story would be very strange and out of place, considering each chapter's brevity and overall tone. So while I think you're easily good enough to manage a...'meatier' in terms of content?...story, the suggestion I made would ill suit these particular stories. |
 Thousand Sunny Lyon 2007-11-27 . chapter 1Cool series! |
 Fashionable Orange 2007-11-21 . chapter 1Brilliant! The humor in this is absolutely perfect to highlight Kakashi's character. It's a little dry and very witty. I love it. |
 sleepdoesnothingforyou 2007-11-15 . chapter 1Oh wow. I've read the other two as well. I just have to say I love it! KakashiAyame is a sort of crack OTP of mine, they'd look so cute together... This has been so amusing and appreciated! I hope you might make more sometime. |
 JacksTortugaLass 2007-11-10 . chapter 1"heaven knows a powerful ninja like that has many silly, silly females fawning over him!"
That he does. *holds up hand*
Oh I simply love this story!
But curious as to why the chapters are each as a seperate story instead of added on to the first story as chapters.
Still! Love it! Looking forward to more. |
 waiting4morning 2007-11-09 . chapter 1"Chock full of chastity!"
Oh Kakashi; ruining the morals of impressionable youth. Tsk tsk. |
 encyser 2007-11-09 . chapter 1I'm curious...why didn't you just post all three fics as 3 chapters in one story? |