Reviews for Four Into Ten Does Go Part Two

Reviews For: Four Into Ten Does Go Part Two

Flaignhan 2008-05-17 ch 18,	abuseFalling in love with the whoniverse again + your supersized fic = a weekend of reading. I cannot convey how good this was. It had EVERYTHING. Drama, romance, comedy, Jack, (cos it's always good to have some Jack) and very very plausible OCs. And I don't think I mentioned this before, but I think that it really helps that I have a huge collection of Oor Wullie annuals when it comes to reading Fergus' dialogue. I just suddenly thought, hang on, how do I know what all this means? Granted I'm part Scottish, but I've never actually BEEN there. Anyway. Useless tidbit of information for you there. And Matt Busby! I'm also a Man U fan so this fic was just everything that pleases me. Something that I really noticed in this fic is how well you write the Doctor, especially his throwaway lines, because they really make him who he is. And the plot, of course. Everything tying together so neatly and wonderfully and sounding just like a really well thought out episode. I think you should catch the next train to Cardiff and join the writer's team for Doctor Who, I honestly do. Anyway, I think I've said enough, I shan't bore you anymore, but I do hope that you write some more DW fics, because you are one of the few writers on this site that comes up with decent stories time after time after time. Ta ta!
Spoofmaster 2007-11-23 ch 18,	abuseWa, your last DW fic? Seriously? Why? Anyway, it was another good one, and I was glad Fergus ended up staying with the Doctor. I liked your original characters, and your use of Martha and Jack. Here's hoping you go back on having this be your last...
Gamine Madcap 2007-11-11 ch 18,	abuseHehehe...can't even begin to tell you how much I LOVED this and the first part. Absolutely wonderful! Can't wait to see more. Keep up the great work and update soon!
Persiflage 2007-11-10 ch 18,	abuseHee - nice one... I liked it a lot. Though I'm wondering who Ten left before going to Wester Drumlins... Found some typos. Ch 6: "Then we have more problems that I thought" "than" not "that" Ch 9: "the mask strapped his face making him seem more distant suddenly" "strapped to" Ch 11: "finding the air outside as toxic as it was outside." one of those "outside"s needs to be an "inside" ! "Tell me what we’re doing when he get to the seventh floor." "we" not "he" "and somehow managing it all into power to feed the tiny little machine sat on your grating?" That sentence doesn't make sense lass ! "it literally blew up in their faces before they it could be delivered to the planet for which it was created" you don't need that "they"... "Bronnin and Kickick did as told very slowly" "did as they were told" Ch 13: "They hears shots fired and shouts of the soldiers." "heard" Ch 14: "The shuffled up but Bronnin grabbed her arm quickly. " "They" "The five of them spread out and began pouring over the huge control board" "poring" Ch 16: "and the old sister turned her big, sad eyes on her sibling. " "older"

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