You did an awesome job writing in Ben's POV; and giving the place a much needed J/F fic. Hope you continue!

Great job! I loved seeing Ben's POV. You did a wonderful job portraying his character. I really enjoyed it!

That was so sweet and lovely! *glomp* Well done - and you did Bell really well!! ^^ Kylie xx

PS - trying to take over the world, or eat it. - i don't know why but i cracked up at this bit!! ^^ Nice touch!