I like this story it was different. Really enjoyed it looking forward into reading more of your stories.

JENNIFER

i find, that the voices are very good. now the voices want me to go try this people-watching, sounds familiar, my friend would sometimes do that, then make lists of how to attract the most attention on the bus etc. well i'm not sure if that's related...but ya.

i like it, very cute.

Ah, so thew voices tell you to write this stuff, do they? Not bad, not bad. )