Please update the story soon?! Gambate!

So interesting! I like it so much! Please update soon~!! ^_^

Let me just say how well written this is. The whole marriage ritual to obtain a new Master of Life and Death was almost amazing. lol Everyone is so in character it's almost scary. lol I just loved how everything was executed. XD I loved how you put some Harvest Moon items in it! I thought that was amazing! But...chapter 4 just ended! It left me wanting more! I was hoping you'd get to the wedding! I would love to read how their wedding would pan out after all of these crazy events. XD Great job, and I hope you update soon! XD

PLEASE update soon~! I really like the plot of your story and keep up the GOOD work!

Funny!! Ahaha.. If I were Danette I would do the same thing as she did. After all, they ARE soul mates.
Bwahahahaha

its quite good your story, i hope you finish it.
ill give you a hodpot if you do

hahah this is great! I loved the chaos at the end. Very SM.

Dose this really have to be one sided I hate to complain but sorry there too many fics with The Hero as the women around here you guys should start a fan club of something...but yeah good fic.

>o about time! I finally got down to reading it, up-dates and fixes have been nice. ;o I wish your chappies would be longer XD I'm a sucker for those but regardless all nice, especially how it all BLOWS in the end.

Great chapter. I think the edits you made were also good.

Crit-wise, there are some minor grammar/phrasing things still. You should try to keep the tense shift consistent, like here: "Gig couldn't be irritated because Levin likes her." I think I see where the confusion is - it's not like Levin has stopped liking her, after all. But keeping the verb tense the same just makes the sentences flow better.

End crit.

XD Your dialogue's seriously taking off in this one. Some really funny stuff here, especially Levin's "novel", also Levin processing how to deal with Gig and Revya's news. The ending is very effective I think - I like all the people/lines/motives chaotically bouncing around; it feels true to the game.

Characterization is also good here, especially in the scene where Gig and Revya try to analyze Levin. Revya's hoping things go smoothly while Gig is predicting disaster. And the ending again, the way everyone just landed in the scene all at once - really funny.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

i think its more than enough! i'd say good work and keep updating!

I liked it!

I want more. ;_; Yay Levin!

Blue feather blue feather blue feather...


...Harvest Moon blue feather system? xD

Loved the part where Gig was trying to be 'romantic.'

And you said my silly picture was win?! This is Ru from DeviantART, you know, the other Soul Nomad fanatic. x3 This is so well written you're lucky I didn't cry tears of joy. Gig's entire scene was top notch, and I love the whole Galahad bit!! It was so random! He's actually one of my favorite characters, so I enjoyed that part. And I like how you incorporated the endings into this fic. Continuity makes me happy. Also, Levin/Revya, you know I love that too, and surprise surprise, I also like Revya/Vitali. Because, it's ** Vitali. What's not to love?