Wow, this took me 3 hours to read, AND IT WAS WORTH IT! You are an a-MAY-ZING writer! Nice job!

Its okay Bendy, I believe you...

Hi! I've recently got into watching Fosters again, thanks to reruns on Boomerang. So, I decided to look for some good fanfics to read, and I found yours on the Fanfic Recommendations on the Foster's TvTropes page. The plot looked really interesting, and when I saw that it was the same person who's left such kind reviews on my stories, I had to check it out.

Honestly, this was a wonderful fanfic! All the characters stayed in-character, and at the same time you developed them and added your own ideas. The story flowed nicely, I liked your OC, and you brought in a lot of interesting ideas, like I.P. Overall, I'm so glad I read it, and I definitely look forward to reading your other Fosters stories :)

Also, I have to hand it to Frankie, I wouldn't have had the strength to let Goofball stay (Freaking hate that guy! I refuse to even rewatch the episode, compared to that the Bendy one is a masterpiece!), and I'm glad he got a little bit of a punishment ;)

I never much liked the way Frankie was forced to play the role of Cinderella near the episode's end; it just seemed like such an unfair judgement, even if she was still wrong in the end. And while she and Goofball did sort of make up at the episode's end, its more comforting to know that "justice" was better spread around this time.

I can understand the series creator, Craig McCracken, paying homage to one of the greatest comedy/science fiction writers of all time, Douglas Adams, by making two of this series characters named Douglas and Adam (with a 42 on one of their shirts no less. Adam, right?). But to give both men the surnames Terry and Pratchett is just shameless sir! Shameless!

This first part has been an enjoyable, if gulity, pleasure experience. I don't want to get into too far depth about it, nor be too conservative, but I just want to say that I think you clearly have a talent for writing great, if somewhat naughty, fan fiction stories. The direction leans far enough into the adult section to be interesting, but not too far as to be a run-of-the-mill pornography. Oh yes, and your concept of Imaginary Friends also intriques me, and I'd like to learn more about it.

Very wonderfully done. A lot of care goes into your storytelling, and that makes it wonderful to read. You're grammar is excellent, everyone is in their character, and the story is compelling. I'm desperately waiting for the epilogue, and since circumstances prevent me from being able to read my email. I have no REAL way to be assured :( Be that as it may, this is a wonderfully done story that i have enjoyed reading.

I can now reveiw! Any way, great chapter for Frankie Rules, thought it was great! Hope you have more stories to come!

RAD/Aurora

(I can't make up my mind of which one I should be called!)

*to lazy to login*

Hurray for updates! i'm looking forward to what you'll do in the future.

um . . . i kinda didn't like it. it was cute then it went BOOM! IN YO FACE!

don't let it be what i think it is . . . .

i must kno0w what is up!

Well…it doesn’t seem fair. Goo needs to save up money for college. She should have more than me. Could you raise her salary and reduce mine?”

so Wilt! nice job!

i kinda don't like that mac and goo are older and that the madam is gone. it' s a ttly awseome story though, it just seesm so . . . something. like an actual story, not like based off something but in the best possible way. i like how wilt's modesty was rewarded and how youre referencing old episodes. can't wait for more Bloo!

oh god! so sad! i'll miss the maddame...

nice chapter! but duchess was nice for once? the world must be ending.